Azure Horizon

Aquamarine waterfall descending on coral rocks,
                  Zenith of sublime serene bliss caressing mountaintops ~
                  Utter tranquility hypnotizes lilac senses,
                  Radiant twilight sun creates kaleidoscopic magic, 
                  Enveloping azure pearlescent canvas of universe ~

                  Horizon blushing coy with tender vermilion sunset,
                  Opalescent glow blends misty water and lustrous sun
                  Reflecting gleaming rays in each tiny water droplets.
                  Imagination takes flight to dreamlike surreal heights...
                  Zen serenades from soaring symphony of temple bells,
                  Orchestrating sonata of homecoming chirping birds...
                  Nature bestows harmonic blessings to cerulean sky ~


                                         December 8, 2021
                            "A" Forms - New Poem Poetry Contest 
                                   Theme: Azure, Form: Acrostic
                                   Sponsor: Constance La France
                                           SECOND PLACE

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Constance La France

Date: 12/31/2021 4:30:00 PM

Mala, congratulations on your Second Place win in my "A" Forms Contest with your beautiful poem ~ friendship and poetry _Constance

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/2/2022 9:04:00 AM

Thanks, Constance. I am honoured.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/24/2021 6:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful/Creative" acrostic write. Love your line, "Nature bestows harmonic blessings to cerulean sky" So true. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/24/2021 4:50:00 AM

Back here with Congratulations on your win with this beautiful acrostic dear Mala... Wishing you and your loved ones Merry Christmas.. Have fun with family... Hugs... ~ Ani

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/23/2021 9:06:00 AM

Hi Malabika, Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Happy Holidays to you and your loved ones. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/23/2021 4:26:00 AM

Coming back to congratulate you. Congratulations!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/13/2021 10:07:00 PM

A beautiful Acrostic on such an interesting theme. Great imagery. By the way, I had written a poem on 'Inspired by a translation'. Unfortunately, I forgot to send it for the contest. I would be so glad if you could kindly go through it and give me your valuable comments. Thanking you.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/14/2021 2:09:00 AM

Thanks, Christuraj. So sorry to know you wrote a poem for my contest, and forgot to enter it! That’s a huge loss for me! Anyway, Dear Friend, no worries, similar contests may happen again in future. I will definitely read your poem, and comment on it. Love and best wishes ~Mala

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/11/2021 7:02:00 AM

Vividly descriptive, with expressive figures of speech, Mala. Janice

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/14/2021 2:10:00 AM

Dear Janice, thank you so much for reading my poem. Really appreciated.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/11/2021 4:19:00 AM

So beautiful and rich in imagery dear Mala... "Radiant sun creates kaleidoscopic magic"... Loved this line... Enjoyed reading your blissful words that bestows harmony... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/14/2021 2:11:00 AM

Dear Anitha, thank you so much. Really appreciate your thoughtful comments.