Ayetoro Beggars

Here we are
come ~ bring it
in the morning
at noon
and in the evening
and if time permits you
and your legs could walk you
in the small hours of the night
like one, or two, or three

Here is our dwell
the comforts of all daylong
the market that markets us to feed
Here are our hands
stretch in front of us
awiting you to drop your lacks
You want progress?
You want to ward off evil spirit?
and many more deep down your mind
We are the needy
always at-alert to take your lacks
to mollify our lacks

Come ~ bring it
Ayetoro is our dwell

Be in the raining
we never retreat
rather, we stand and recline our back
on the wall, faces the road
fiddle palms to the merciful lord
who created you and us
Disequilibrium
to take off the barbaric rain
which falls on the young
with no respects for the old
and infuses us pleasant cold
and we shiver like leaves on the stream
although we are one with it

Be in the dry
we never retreat from the endless sun
that burns the skin like igniting fire
our bodies are the junction of dust
although we are one with it

We love and we become one
so we increase as the day moves on
with hope that our posterity
would write a new story



Ayetoro (peaceful life) is a well known street in Osogbo, capital city of Osun State Nigeria.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lawless Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Sadly, even in the richest of countries such sights can be seen. A wonderful write that touches the heart.
Ogundare Avatar
October 10, 2016 at 10:46 AM
I love this poem Afolabi, such love for a place. Beautiful description.
A   Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 12:10 AM
A.M. , a very nice poem, the scenery is beautiful and inspiring that the new day will flourish a beautiful new story ...Linda
Lamoureux Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 10:54 PM
I enjoyed your compassionate piece.
Muideen Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 12:51 AM
Thank you so so much for loving me and my poems. You are always welcome with sweet comment. Blessings!
May Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 6:57 PM
A powerful write on the plight and persistence of those who are in need
Muideen Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 12:47 AM
It touch my heart painfully also when I see them and to think that I'm helpless to them. Thank you for the pleasant comment.
Haight Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 4:33 PM
A sad and emotional poem which you have written so well to bring us their suffering and determination. This really tugs at my heart, Afolabi. Sandra
Muideen Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 4:43 PM
It pains me so much whenever I pass through the place. However, that is the truth of life. Our fingers describe it vividly. They are longer each other. Thanks foe the worm comment, I do appreciate.
Kendrick Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 3:52 PM
Emotional work..I enjoyed reading it..It is sad to think that children ae hungry in the world..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Oh, that was good to get to the end and see what Ayetoro was. it really is a cool title to your poem!Loved how you showed them so persistent in spite of being down on their luck. They are good at what they do!!!
Muideen Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 4:32 PM
The tittle negate with their present over there. They are in really abject poverty. I chose this to write it this way so as to placate it bang on the hearing. I love the worm comment.
Callus Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 2:45 PM
'Tis a poem written with feeling and compassion, Afolabi. These are not lazy beggars, but people who have no work or possessions, and who need help, clothing and food. There is such an imbalance in a world where some have too much and others have too little! // paul
Muideen Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 4:23 PM
That is it sir. They are not lazy, they really need help. However, many people would rather keep their hands with them than give it to those beggar. They would never give it, not until they are in a serious problem. Thank you for the great comment, I do appreciate it.
Tanwar Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 12:49 PM
i just heard about nigeria from the franz...1st time reading...always beautiful ....awesome...eplanenation
Muideen Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 4:14 PM
Great that you have finally heard it to day. Thank you for dropping by.
Sathasivam Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 7:27 AM
A heartfelt write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
Muideen Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Thank you dropping by, I do appreciate your comment.
Trifiatis Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 4:56 AM
A yearning heart blazing with passion for kindness and justice hoping against hope for a better world, that is what you are my dear friend, Afolabi! May God be with you so you keep the beacon of love burning! A seven!
Muideen Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Sir, I feel sorry for them each time I pass through the please. Thank you for the pleasant comment. Blessings.
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