Aye,Aye, and a Mistress

Writers wrong readers with wiles
Please protect poetry and prose
From flagrant fraudulent fancies
Of overwritten odius odes.

A related collection of poetry
Now can be published at whim.
The author just needs lots of money,
Hubris,and perhaps a few pencils or pens.
Once the selection is published,
Layman will fawn at the elequent jewels,
Of eight words of lithe, flowery meter,
Grouped together by formal,old rules,
You and I know better,we can't be fooled. 

Another anthology appears
Boldly boasting ballades
Can't construct cinquain
Ditto deconconstructing didactic

Easy efforts elevate essentially
Fabulous flippery, fun, fauxmance.
Give gifts ,gaity, glory
Hide hyperbole ,hail honesty

Ignore idiosincricy
Jubilant jeweled jots,
Krielle knowledge,
Luminates lovers learning.

Masters manage monoku
No one notices nonsense
Only ones own oratory
Presents problems personally

Quatern quixotically quizes
Rhymers,readers, royalaires.
Simples statements said softly
Translate terse tense truthfully

Unless unabridged
Villanelles vex vaguries
Written without wordiness
Yes,you yearn, yearn yonder

Zee's zero

For Deb's Challenge A A and a Mistress

Brenda Atry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bordner Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 12:14 PM
I have so much to learn from this derisive masterpiece Brenda - let us all pray that we are not fooled by our own foolishness my friend - let us not become that which we loathe - with somber respect, J.A.B. %
Onclaud Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 11:29 AM
any new poem, brenda?? would love to read you again! :) huggs, nette
Guzzi Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 9:20 AM
Congrad's hon thanks for taking the time out to enter! SOUP MAIL Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 7:35 AM
brenda, congrats on a well deserved glowing award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs
George   Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 5:27 AM
Great writing, Brenda. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Elaine
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 5:27 AM
Congratulations Brenda on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Aye, Aye, and A Mistress"contest. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 7:09 PM
Congrats Brenda on your super success and win in this contest with a fantastic creation luv.. enjoy top billing...
Mehta Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Stunning and powerful entry to the theme of the contest, brenda, enjoyed the flow of expressions
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 11:55 AM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Brenda. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 7:26 PM
Well, Im exhausted just reading it! well done my dear...BG
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