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Aye Forms Masked

An interlude forms around the apertures Brows born of liquid gold arch like the bent rays of the sun Cresting above irises of obsidian black and liner of kohl Daydreams quiver above a cupid’s bow of upper lip Ecstasy awaits the unmasking interloper. Alluring analgesic to the proper, pivotal moldings modify majestic moles, marking beauty beyond the banal, heightening the hardened features of heaven's harlots. M aking the internal mirror the external, A sking the private to maintain its allure by encapsulation. S he satisfies sinful longings by subterfuge. K illing all that remains of her nubile heart. *The verse regarding masks IS masked in 3 forms ABC, Acrostic and Alliterative Form. Contest: It's Mask Time Poet: Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 7/25/2011 1:39:00 AM
complicated together verse, well done babe ... xo, Don
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Date: 7/24/2011 6:56:00 PM
alot of creative verse work in this one Debbie. Congrats to you!
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Date: 7/24/2011 4:13:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your stunning win with this stellar poetry in Mask luv... enjoy sweet success for excellent poetry once again..oh...
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Date: 7/24/2011 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Mask" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/23/2011 3:44:00 PM
Cool Debbie! Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/19/2011 2:03:00 PM
You have mastered these forms, Deb. Best wishes in the contest. Elaine
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Date: 7/18/2011 7:16:00 AM
Deb, this is something I have enjoyed in the past, taking a challenge and really making it one's own. You took your own challenge and combined it with mask in a unique way that Nette would be crazy not to appreciate! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/17/2011 6:08:00 PM
I wish I could be half as clever! This is fantastic - good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 7/17/2011 6:05:00 PM
How cool is this, Debbie? Not only did you take on Nette's challenge here with this clever write, you also took up on your own challenge! :) way to go! eep-- which reminds me of your contest-- is it filled up??? lemme go check! I haven't written anything new for any contest lately...hugs
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Date: 7/17/2011 5:25:00 PM
Hello.. It was nice to read your wonderful poetry today :) take care. Dana'lynn
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Date: 7/16/2011 9:06:00 PM
deeply intense piece Debbie ..I was mesmerized .. luv the Acrostic at the end.. it is unique and coordinates well with the rest of the write luv.. good luck in the contest ..
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