Aye Aye and a Mistress

HIS   WISH   TO   STOP  ZEBRAS  FISHING

Zebras you, Xavier, want very urgently to sit real quiet,
Pound over numberless  marine  liquid  kilometers just in haste,  
Going  for every  dogfish  casually  basking around.

(Reverse  ABC )
 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 

ACROSTIC

How to stop them
Is the problem
So let's  start to think . . . 

Where are these zebras going
In such haste
Searching for 
Hours and hours 
Till the sun dips 
Over the hill and 
Sunset arrives?

They need fish 
Or else their hunger
Pains will exceed those of any 
Zebra,  crocodile
Elephant, rhinoceros
Buffalo or dog,
Roaring with pains 
All through their 
Stomachs :  so

For God’s sake
In the name of mealtimes
Suffer the little zebras,
However striped and horse-like,
In their passion  for dogfish.

No doubt  Xavier's  - like the zebra’s  -
Gotta   eat too.

(  Acrostic reads  “HIS WISH  -  TO STOP ZEBRAS FISHING”  )

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

ALL   XAVIER’S   ANIMALS   HAVE   THEIR   ROLES

Zebras zoom zestfully  -  zombies zipping,
But  - basking  between big broad 
Dogfish doing dances, diving, dripping  - 

Shy shellfish stop, sitting serenely still,  so several survive,
Casually caring, clearly cooperating,
And always active and artfully alive.

My male mallard merry  makes  -
Quickly quacking,  quietly quiescent  -
Loving long-lasting little liquid lakes.

. . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Entry  for  Debbie Guzzi's Contest 	"Aye, Aye, and A Mistress"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/19/2011 7:41:00 AM
SYD....congrats on a well deserved glowing award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs
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Date: 7/19/2011 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations Syd on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Aye, Aye, and A Mistress"contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2011 8:47:00 AM
what a lively zoo you got here, syd... now, i groan like a zebra after having seen you copied my phrases again ( kidding)... high fives for this one! :) huggs
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Date: 6/25/2011 9:08:00 AM
HAha, very good.... smiles form this one... Michael
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