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Could it be possible, all i see is an illusion? Notice all of the confusion. Nonetheless lies and intrusion. I must fight them to live my own life. I must stay sharp, like a steak knife. There very well may never be a physical bruise- to what importance of standards would it mean; to win or to lose. We are quick to demonize insanity, however, uphold the usage of inanity; when we know the similarity shared between us all, is the want to be free- can we agree? There is insanity in us all- the capability to quickly rise and fall. I control the eyes of I, to create my desired reality; or at least try. - CS

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Date: 7/11/2018 11:56:00 AM
I would like feedback from those who read my poems, please. :) have a lovely and blessed day
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Date: 7/10/2018 1:33:00 PM
Hi Courny.. Welcome to Poetry Soup! You're going to love it here. Read and comment on others poets writes and they will do the same for you.. I may have already commented on your poetry! Take a minute to come check out my latest write. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
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Courtny Steward
Date: 7/10/2018 9:33:00 PM
Hello! Thank you very much for reading and the advice. I will look in to your work :) stay awesome!

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