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Awe-

Sky: gold, tinsel, melt. Ocean ripples; slow gel smile. pure white sparkle: Beauty.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/27/2010 2:39:00 PM
Interesting use of minimalist wording to impact a HUGE potential vsion to the reader. Brilliantly done! irish
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Date: 3/26/2010 9:59:00 PM
cute haiku... enjoyed
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