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"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces" John Ruskin, 1853
I am riding a galloping horse, On a far away lonely beach, racing along the wet sands, as sea reaches to accost my feet, the blowing breeze jolts memories, of a cradle song I have heard, rocking slowly in the moonbeams, as mum sings her lullabies, every breath a lifetime, every moment a memory, all that is gained in life through love, comes rushing back to me! silent creeps the winter snow, hustling in more past imagery, the warmth of fire, childhood desires, amidst a loving family. a sea gull calls like years before, when the evening was for you and me, meanwhile on my galloping horse, there is no where else to flee, broken, shattered, our love a remorse, but your eyes still follow me!
Ist placement ‘All the little pieces‘ poetry contest Sponsor Constance La France Written 29/08/2020

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Date: 9/10/2020 3:07:00 AM
Such an amazing write.....congrats on your win Krish.Take care :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/10/2020 4:24:00 AM
Carol thanks a lot! great to have you visit my page!! regards
Date: 9/10/2020 2:42:00 AM
Krish, congratulations on your win in my challenge All The Little Pieces with this excellent write _Constance
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/10/2020 4:23:00 AM
Thanks Constance! Very pleased and such a lovely contest!! Thanks for organising this!
Date: 9/4/2020 4:07:00 AM
- Oh, life goes too fast - A beautiful poem, Krish :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/4/2020 4:29:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise! Love your comments! You have a great weekend too! BW Krish
Date: 9/3/2020 4:27:00 PM
Gosh darn, Krish. What a fantastic creation! Firstly Congratulations on your well earned No. 1 Win. Readers are here with you, the galloping on beach opening pulls us in (to a rapturous place, easy)! Gorgeous rhythm continues to tell us your lovely life with your Mum. I think your poem says she's passed away. If that is the case, so young-- I'm sorry for the sadness and what you're missing.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/3/2020 9:51:00 PM
Dear Sigrid Thanks and for your lovely comments! The galloping horse represents time and the ocean- the vastness of life! We are all riding this horse! My mum is well and she is 90 but she has been an important force in our lives! Warm Regards

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