Away

I need a vacation a holiday per se time sans distraction a me kind of day   I'll gaze at your oceans where sharks come to swim throw out a life raft as I delve in your sin   I'll open a bottle of red, no make it white we'll stare at the sunset waiting on night   The moon will come out and we will undress the worries and bothers in a life that's a mess   So I'll take me a breather and sit down at the beach only love sits beside me with the world out of reach
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 8/17/2018 12:20:00 PM
It's wonderful to escape from reality this way, even if it's only a poetic journey. Enjoyed reading your upbeat poem, Tim! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 8/16/2018 10:00:00 PM
I hear you on this, thinking of taking off for a few days myself. great write!
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Date: 8/16/2018 5:21:00 PM
You and i both! Once a week i go to the beach... That's all California is. It's free and amazing, plus when I'm there i know someone gorgeous is present :) tranquility it is.
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Date: 8/16/2018 7:40:00 PM
I'll be out there a lot. Moving my daughter into San Diego State next week.
Date: 8/16/2018 3:23:00 PM
So much to read between the waves...A life raft sounds fine when one is surrounded by sharks ..I prefer to swim with the dolphins.. :).Interesting poem Tim..
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Date: 8/16/2018 10:38:00 AM
Awesomeness :)) I love it. xomo
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Date: 8/16/2018 9:38:00 AM
Very nice Tim. I enjoyed this today :)
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Date: 8/16/2018 7:31:00 AM
This one definitely speaks to me. Time away from everything sounds just perfect. Nicely done Tim
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