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Awaking in shackles

awake from darkness, in chains,he feels the cold grip- numbness fades to pain.

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Yann Rolland

Date: 3/9/2025 7:25:00 AM

so much said in few words, could feel pain too

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/12/2025 12:49:00 AM

Thank you

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/6/2025 7:42:00 AM

A powerful poem, Akham~~conveying so much in so few words! Janice

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/12/2025 12:49:00 AM

Thank you

Ink Empress

Date: 3/6/2025 1:05:00 AM

" numbness fades to pain" that line speaks volumes! A very deep and dark poem that many would feel so deeply! Very well written in few syllables!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/4/2025 11:54:00 AM

Traps should not be allowed. Thank you for a poem of awakening.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/12/2025 12:48:00 AM

Thank you

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/3/2025 5:45:00 AM

Emotive and a bit terrifying. Hugs

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/3/2025 8:23:00 PM

Thank you

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/2/2025 10:55:00 PM

Great metaphoric and subtle haiku. You did well.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/2/2025 11:06:00 PM

Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2025 4:04:00 PM

I really like this. But also pain may fade to numbness.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/2/2025 7:14:00 PM

Thank you