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Awakening Spring (Double Acrostic and End Line Word)

Around the corner, the sun will show its new face after A Well earned time of having endured through the cold of Winter. Anticipation is felt as nature burgeons and animals wake Anew Keenly sensing the coming of spring with all its love felt in its Kaleidoscopic Emergence of colors everywhere and its fragrances brought by the Elements. Nature at its youth, feeling the excitement throughout, that we all Naturally Instinctively experience rebirth within the fiber of our hearts; yet still Intimidated, Not having yet forgotten the frozen breath of the dying icy season. But Now Gratitude moves into the soul from the lessons learned, and we thank God. Sweetly, we turn our eyes to the heavens above for the blessing of its Smile Pleasantly blowing to us in fragrant love with the breezes and the waters, Preparing Rebirth of nature, and the birds sing us their songs of love while rigorously Investing their all in the building of their nest for their offspring, so impatient, Nagging at times to their loved ones, then making it all a fun game to play. Nature Gathering their families and I remember my parents for whom I thank God. By CarolineCecile Copyright © 02.20.10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/25/2010 9:38:00 AM
Wow! This is an incredible use of the end-line form, Caroline. You have taken the competition to new heights with your imagery and vibrance! Superb entry that will surely be in the winner's circle. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/22/2010 5:04:00 PM
Dear Caroline,YOU have done an absolutely, Amazing "Acrostic, "End Line Word" Poem YOUR Talent is Laureatus I enjoy learning about YOU through YOUR Superior POETRY I have tomorrow off and will read More of YOUR gifted POETIC Insight YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 2/20/2010 6:43:00 PM
What a well thought out poem. I find acrostic hard enough without trying something like this. Great job. Should do well in the end line contest. I am assuming you will enter it....thanks for your encouragement today..cheers Margaret
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Date: 2/20/2010 5:01:00 PM
what an interesting acrostic so deep and provocative. Light & Love
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Date: 2/20/2010 4:52:00 PM
I couldn't change "things" because when I talk about things I mean them in the sense of things as they exist. i.e. concrete objects as they exist in reality. I'm saying essentially i walk around at the edge of reality or "things". So "trails" would not work in this instance. Unless I were using a forest as a metaphor for reality. Which I'm not.
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