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Awakening Love - Hiku 8

Written: May 24, 2025, For contest by Brian Strand *********************** F i n g e \|/ \|/ r t i p s of d*a*w*n *** r e d \|/\|/ n * * * e m o r n i n g t ~ ~ s o f t o u c h a w a k e n i n g l o v e sw eet a c h e ~~~

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Date: 5/27/2025 2:31:00 PM
Sweet-
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Date: 5/26/2025 12:34:00 PM
Creative! Congrats!
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Date: 5/25/2025 10:13:00 AM
What a fun read and creative write. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away.........
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Date: 5/25/2025 7:14:00 AM
- Really well done and lovely written, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/25/2025 7:11:00 AM
I love how youv personified elements of nature and delivered such an artistic write on awakening and dawn, how beautiful is the way your lines are arranged too! I especially love " fingertips of dawn " and "morning soft touch and the second one with love and the aching emotions that flow really left me feeling so much dr sotto! Best wishes for the contest! I suppose i should do my hiku too soon! Sending you light always
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Date: 5/25/2025 6:51:00 AM
Sweet ache: I must think on that but not at dawn.
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Date: 5/24/2025 7:34:00 PM
Very creative use of line & devices. I’m still learning this form. Initially I thought haiku could only be three lines, 17 syllables. I’ve noticed this rule no longer applies. ThkU, Sotto.
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