Awakening Love - Hiku 8

Written: May 24, 2025, For contest by Brian Strand

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F
  i
    n
      g
        e                                         \|/ \|/     
          r   t i p s    of      d*a*w*n    ***     

                               r 
                             e
                           d
     \|/\|/            n
     * * *          e
m o r n i n g    t   ~     ~   s  o  f  t
                       o 
                          u
                              c
                                  h       


a w
a k
e n
i  n
 g      l o v e   sw eet  a
                                  c
                                    h
                                     e  ~~~

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Date: 5/27/2025 2:31:00 PM
Sweet-
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Date: 5/26/2025 12:34:00 PM
Creative! Congrats!
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Date: 5/25/2025 10:13:00 AM
What a fun read and creative write. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away.........
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Date: 5/25/2025 7:14:00 AM
- Really well done and lovely written, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/25/2025 7:11:00 AM
I love how youv personified elements of nature and delivered such an artistic write on awakening and dawn, how beautiful is the way your lines are arranged too! I especially love " fingertips of dawn " and "morning soft touch and the second one with love and the aching emotions that flow really left me feeling so much dr sotto! Best wishes for the contest! I suppose i should do my hiku too soon! Sending you light always
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Date: 5/25/2025 6:51:00 AM
Sweet ache: I must think on that but not at dawn.
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Date: 5/24/2025 7:34:00 PM
Very creative use of line & devices. I’m still learning this form. Initially I thought haiku could only be three lines, 17 syllables. I’ve noticed this rule no longer applies. ThkU, Sotto.
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