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Poetry/Dizain/Awakening From Stupor
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1616-791-16
All Right Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, January 16, 2024
For the International Contest, Awakening From Stupor
Sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 01/23/2024

Third Place

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Awakening From Stupor

 
"There are only two days in the year that nothing can be done. One is called yesterday and the other is called tomorrow, so today is the right day to love, believe, do, and mostly live." Quote by _Dalai Lama
Most of my life has been like a dream trance, repressed and lost in one long grief coma: but, I have found my now moment and chance, I no longer want the melodrama; want to enjoy this life's sweet aroma. It is a rebirth of the joyful me, and I am breezy, happy and carefree: the child in me is quite alive and well, in calm silence I have found the true me; within stillness of soul- I wish to dwell. “it’s not desire per say but the clinging ~ that stifles soul and stops heart from singing enlivening silence sets our soul free ~ vibrant in the now, joyful and carefree”
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Date: 1/25/2024 7:16:00 AM
Well done Constance.:0)
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Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2024 8:41:00 PM
Richard, thank you for the compliment, Constance
Date: 1/24/2024 6:12:00 PM
Precious , congrats
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Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2024 8:41:00 PM
Mystic, thank you for the compliment and congrats, Constance
Date: 1/24/2024 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement my friend..
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Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2024 8:42:00 PM
Silent, thank you for the congratulations, your friend, Constance
Date: 1/23/2024 10:01:00 PM
"It is a rebirth of the joyful me, and I am breezy, happy and carefree:" This transformation is so amazing. We all feel immensely happy for you that you have emerged from the sickening shadow if your dear ones' demise into a life of light and cheer. Congratulations in your great win Constance.
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Date: 1/25/2024 8:43:00 PM
Valsa, thank you for the comment, compliment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 1/17/2024 11:50:00 AM
This is truly lovely and uplifting. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs Rick.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/17/2024 1:57:00 PM
Richard, so nice to hear from you. Thank you for the compliment and encouragement, hugs, Constance
Date: 1/16/2024 1:25:00 PM
Love this, and you chose a really cool form to do it in, Dear Heart.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/16/2024 4:52:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 1/16/2024 12:53:00 PM
Loving the rhymes and flow in your dizain.. nice choice for the contest.. Best of luck my friend..
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Constance La France
Date: 1/16/2024 4:53:00 PM
Silent, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and encouragement, blessings, Constance
Date: 1/16/2024 11:10:00 AM
Lifes sweet aroma, i hope will always keep your soul warm dear constance: i enjoyed this powerful dizain really. Well written and delivered. Sending you light always. Best wishes for the contest
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Constance La France
Date: 1/16/2024 4:53:00 PM
Ink, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and encouragement, blessings, Constance
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