Awakening


Whilst at school, in the years gone by, when as a child,

Impish I was, and sprightly too, but not so sure of my mind;

Followed the old teacher’s dictum, “memorise by rote,

To succeed in life”, she said, so I got into the hard grind;


Truly, the best of my growing years, I had burned out,

Losing my sweet innocence in, fun filled frolic and play;

Coming of age, dilatorily, I realised, an axiom of life,

Nothing shall be gained, and everything lost, if I delay;


Deep in my heart, before college, I was so foolishly certain,

I was the one to have a broad, sentient, and an open mind;

Years of academic pursuit have scholastically conditioned me,

Graduate study promised the rainbow, but coloured me blind;


In the birth, infancy, and adolescence of a growing mind,

I thought, perceived, and believed everyone called me “blessed”;

Gathering my senses, from the stupor of failed endeavours,

I realised late, but for good, they had actually said “distressed”;


Rising from the ashes, determined in taking up a position,

I staunchly, believed in core integrity, and plumped for justice;

The grand old existing system, of bureaucracy, among others,

Taught me the principles I was proud of, now is my nemesis;


I know not, and care not, what predicaments and problems,

Might appear today, tomorrow, or the more distant future;

I shall forget the past unredeemed, and enjoy the present

Indescribable, nothing can dampen my exuberant nature.



mbfarookh ©
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Warlov Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 5:31 PM
Socratic or Scloratic? ~ EDIT: If "the grand old system" is your 'nemesis', it's singular (is) but "principles" would be plural (are). Forgot about Google ~ That was easy ~ The plural of nemesis is nemeses
Warlov Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 12:07 AM
I thought it was interesting; whether the institution as a whole had to be excised from your psyche or just the materials inculcations.
Farookh Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 12:04 AM
I'm glad I went with Nemesis instead of Nemeses. However, I appreciate your contribution which is valuable to me.
Warlov Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 9:42 PM
I believe I've unintentionally misled you. I forgot that Nemesis was a Greek god and (unlike the Christian Go.d.d.d.) is therefore, singular. ~ 'The Greek goddess Nemesis was the goddess of divine retribution'.
Warlov Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 9:25 PM
It can be read either way
Farookh Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 9:24 PM
Now, I am editing from 'are' to 'is' to give life to nemesis. Lol.
Warlov Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 9:22 PM
K
Farookh Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 9:14 PM
Actually, I was focusing on "principles'. You are right about nemeses, RW. Thank you ??
Kelly Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 7:25 AM
Well on your awakening path mb. I love how you have put your road from the past to your spiritual present.
Farookh Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 12:57 PM
Thank you so much DK, for your insightful comment. It means a lot to me.
Greenhough Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 9:33 PM
Such a happy ending. Youth certainly contains the most difficult years. Thank you for a fine poem.
Farookh Avatar
December 13, 2023 at 11:17 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments. I am new here and still finding my way around.
One Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 3:13 AM
Great poem about your younger years. You expressed it very well.
Farookh Avatar
December 13, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Thank you so much for the kind words. I am new here and still finding my way around.
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