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Awakening

Whilst at school, in the years gone by, when as a child, Impish I was, and sprightly too, but not so sure of my mind; Followed the old teacher’s dictum, “memorise by rote, To succeed in life”, she said, so I got into the hard grind; Truly, the best of my growing years, I had burned out, Losing my sweet innocence in, fun filled frolic and play; Coming of age, dilatorily, I realised, an axiom of life, Nothing shall be gained, and everything lost, if I delay; Deep in my heart, before college, I was so foolishly certain, I was the one to have a broad, sentient, and an open mind; Years of academic pursuit have scholastically conditioned me, Graduate study promised the rainbow, but coloured me blind; In the birth, infancy, and adolescence of a growing mind, I thought, perceived, and believed everyone called me “blessed”; Gathering my senses, from the stupor of failed endeavours, I realised late, but for good, they had actually said “distressed”; Rising from the ashes, determined in taking up a position, I staunchly, believed in core integrity, and plumped for justice; The grand old existing system, of bureaucracy, among others, Taught me the principles I was proud of, now is my nemesis; I know not, and care not, what predicaments and problems, Might appear today, tomorrow, or the more distant future; I shall forget the past unredeemed, and enjoy the present Indescribable, nothing can dampen my exuberant nature. mbfarookh ©

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Date: 12/15/2023 5:31:00 PM
Socratic or Scloratic? ~ EDIT: If "the grand old system" is your 'nemesis', it's singular (is) but "principles" would be plural (are). Forgot about Google ~ That was easy ~ The plural of nemesis is nemeses
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Robert Warlov
Date: 12/16/2023 12:07:00 AM
I thought it was interesting; whether the institution as a whole had to be excised from your psyche or just the materials inculcations.
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MB Farookh
Date: 12/16/2023 12:04:00 AM
I'm glad I went with Nemesis instead of Nemeses. However, I appreciate your contribution which is valuable to me.
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Robert Warlov
Date: 12/15/2023 9:42:00 PM
I believe I've unintentionally misled you. I forgot that Nemesis was a Greek god and (unlike the Christian Go.d.d.d.) is therefore, singular. ~ 'The Greek goddess Nemesis was the goddess of divine retribution'.
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Robert Warlov
Date: 12/15/2023 9:25:00 PM
It can be read either way
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MB Farookh
Date: 12/15/2023 9:24:00 PM
Now, I am editing from 'are' to 'is' to give life to nemesis. Lol.
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Robert Warlov
Date: 12/15/2023 9:22:00 PM
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MB Farookh
Date: 12/15/2023 9:14:00 PM
Actually, I was focusing on "principles'. You are right about nemeses, RW. Thank you ??
Date: 12/15/2023 7:25:00 AM
Well on your awakening path mb. I love how you have put your road from the past to your spiritual present.
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MB Farookh
Date: 12/15/2023 12:57:00 PM
Thank you so much DK, for your insightful comment. It means a lot to me.
Date: 12/10/2023 9:33:00 PM
Such a happy ending. Youth certainly contains the most difficult years. Thank you for a fine poem.
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MB Farookh
Date: 12/13/2023 11:17:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments. I am new here and still finding my way around.
Date: 12/9/2023 3:13:00 AM
Great poem about your younger years. You expressed it very well.
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MB Farookh
Date: 12/13/2023 11:18:00 AM
Thank you so much for the kind words. I am new here and still finding my way around.

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