Awakened soul
The days awakened soul
draws me to the beach
crystal sand sticks to feet
as I walk out of ocean's grasp
and collapse onto beach towel
under sun's command I lay
absorbing all its rays
til clouds roll in for sudden afternoon storm
and chase me on my way
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