Awakened Longing


The scene you render, serene and sublime,
Awakens a longing, untouched by time.
Symbolic and sweet, your desires so true,
My soul aches for the soft touch of you.

Perchance an angel from realms above,
Sent to restore my faith in love.
Yet here lies a cold, callused heart,
Memories of love, a soul torn apart.

Love’s sweet whispers, once graced my ear,
But shadows fell and hearts did sear.
Betrayed by love, left in despair,
Now haunted by memories, heartache to bear.

Once-cherished dreams, now ghostly veils,
Love’s promises, like ships that sail.
Adrift in sorrow, hearts washed astray,
Your guiding light, shores of a new day.

Your ethereal beauty shines so bright,
My heart, an empty cavern, devoid of light,
Perhaps a candle to illuminate these dark halls,
Your tenderness and compassion enthralls.

All I yearn is to be wanted and desired,
To be seen once more, cherished and admired.
In this cold, lonely world, I’m utterly alone,
Longing for a warm embrace, to feel at home.

With you, perchance, I shall find my place,
Restored by your boundless love and grace.
No more to wander, no more to roam,
In each other’s arms, we find our home.

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Date: 6/14/2024 8:36:00 AM
Lovely rhyme, so natural and well flowing!! When you find that special someone, She will bring back the Spring back into your life. Loneliness is an extension of deep love now lost.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 6/14/2024 9:32:00 AM
Time takes from us all. Pray that your final grains fall before the ones you cherish most.
Date: 6/11/2024 1:57:00 PM
Great rhymes Edward. Some advice: If ya wanna get noticed ya gotta play da game. Yeah, tit for tat. It's pathetic but it's how social media works, except for the elite.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 6/14/2024 6:39:00 AM
Appreciate the advice Tom. Thank you
Date: 6/9/2024 10:14:00 AM
Love is a melancholic journey.
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