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Awakened Energy

harmony of breath awakens light’s energy… song of heart vibrates molecules of thought expands through my universe… creating new paths Contest: Senryu On Cellular Energy Sponsor: Marvin Celestial 9/12/2015

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 9/19/2015 5:56:00 PM

Congratulations to the WIN of your spiritual piece nette! ;-)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/16/2015 11:20:00 PM

Deep senryus nette! Congrats on awesome win!

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 9/16/2015 7:07:00 PM

Congratz Nette!

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/13/2015 11:54:00 AM

The vibrance of life throbs in each line of this senryu, Nette. All the best! huggs!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/12/2015 4:14:00 AM

Spiritual opening through inner communication! A seven , dear nette!

Thomas Martin

Date: 9/11/2015 6:03:00 PM

Usually do not comment on haiku or senryu, but hese are exceptionally well wrought! A 7 for sure!

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/11/2015 5:20:00 PM

You are either into yoga or buddhism or both your mind is very serene even when writing about molecules..

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/11/2015 2:41:00 PM

Well said! Best of luck in the contest :)

Leon Datu

Date: 9/11/2015 2:39:00 PM

Deep, enlightening piece on ink you have glossed through your page!