Nette Onclaud Poet Senryu

Awakened Energy

harmony of breath
awakens light’s energy…
song of heart vibrates

molecules of thought
expands through my universe…
creating new paths



Contest: Senryu On Cellular Energy
Sponsor: Marvin Celestial
9/12/2015

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Teddy Kimathi September 19, 2015 at 5:56 PM Congratulations to the WIN of your spiritual piece nette! ;-)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 11:20 PM Deep senryus nette! Congrats on awesome win!

Marvin G. Celestial September 16, 2015 at 7:07 PM Congratz Nette!

Kp Nunez September 13, 2015 at 11:54 AM The vibrance of life throbs in each line of this senryu, Nette. All the best! huggs!

Demetrios Trifiatis September 12, 2015 at 4:14 AM Spiritual opening through inner communication! A seven , dear nette!

Thomas Martin September 11, 2015 at 6:03 PM Usually do not comment on haiku or senryu, but hese are exceptionally well wrought! A 7 for sure!

Frederic Parker September 11, 2015 at 5:20 PM You are either into yoga or buddhism or both your mind is very serene even when writing about molecules..

Casarah Nance September 11, 2015 at 2:41 PM Well said! Best of luck in the contest :)

Leon Datu September 11, 2015 at 2:39 PM Deep, enlightening piece on ink you have glossed through your page!