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I was not too old to hold my mother’s hand, but too young to understand the thoughts that mither mind of man. That serpent’s wiley snare when seeing female form beneath her clothes, eyes were opened, and caught this Adam unaware. Thus seeing does seduce, now opened eyes can see, and thus this sin is loosed. Lord still deliver me.

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Date: 5/20/2020 7:04:00 PM
Love the sense of humor you use to deliver this little gem, Bob.
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