Awake

I tottered to the bedroom window 
then, painfully, clumsily 
drew back the curtains ‘pon my today. 
At first glance
morning blinded me with wilful extravagance
reminiscent of a woman at a certain age, 
bling-ful, blinding!  

Until - unwrapping my senses
I awoke to facts, figures and self-made fake! 
Time dripped into view, stuttering
cruel reality, t’was 
four thirty-four of too early the clock,
too cruel a symphony, 
conducted by maestro insomnia?

Stripped of silver veils
a near final chorus of pink-tipped stars
slipped ‘tween two soft breasted hills
they, distant enough, moist with dew..
an I smiled, drawing my blue towelling robe 
around my insurgent wakefulness
denying dreams. 

Old oak clock chimed irreverent
as mile away waves thundered gainst a covey of
ancient cliffs, their Jurassic throats 
echoing the satiated depths of time past
where soft played the reel  
luring me quiet the salt 
coating my cheeks ‘tween sanity and sleep.

Trembling my empty mind to work, slowly, slowly
my eyes opened wider than wide
sleep-walking the stupidity of my role
tiI now unaware.
Nary a word penned, nor a need to. 
A few blinks away time calls reality: 
‘Hello, Monday, welcome to my world!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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February 13, 2018 at 6:32 AM
This poem flows so well, I must say I liked the stripped of silver veils stanza, great imagery.. What a pen you have..
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February 14, 2018 at 6:22 AM
My words can gallop and as i ride reinless - it's hit and miss, oh Silent One. Many thanks, yet again. Will reciprocate in a while, need take lunch to two elderly darlings.
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February 12, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Such a dream-like feel flows from your poem today. Some days (and nights) certainly do feel this way. Extremely creative and beautifully written poetic scenes here. Nicely done.
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February 14, 2018 at 6:23 AM
What generous words, thank you so very much, Chris.. who shares my surname !
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