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Awaits the Dawn

The Rose awaits dawn Jewelled tears to soothe bird upon the wing calls out reveille waning moon exits. The breeze whispers spirit so free shakes new born leaves rustles the tide. Morning breaks azure sky hides the stars. Nature's habit. Pure. © Harry J Horsman 2021

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 12/19/2021 8:50:00 AM

Hello hh - This entry is poetic in every way starting with the title. Truly. We see the beauty of nature and its transformation of life and beauty. Be very proud of this entry and your poetic execution. Further, this is one of those entries that should be read out loud with emphasis and expression. Thank you for sharing with us. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and your family. Peace and blessings always.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/22/2021 9:06:00 PM

Wonderful, Harry. The brevity of your lines has such impact. A grand read my friend. Congratulations! Stay healthy. Cheers, Brian

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 1/24/2021 6:07:00 AM

Lovely, congrats on your win

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/23/2021 9:38:00 AM

Pure beauty of words flowing gracefully from the dawn Harry. You have really captured the "pure" of each sunrise. Congratulations on your first place win!

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/23/2021 3:08:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! God bless you.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/23/2021 1:25:00 AM

Excellent, but why am I surprised?

Eve Roper

Date: 1/22/2021 7:14:00 PM

Harry, I was a pleased to read your Diminished Hexaverse with great imagery and flow . Congratulations on your winning write. Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/22/2021 6:53:00 PM

WoW! Harry, This is a fine piece of poetry! It's just breathtaking. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/22/2021 3:07:00 PM

CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this beautiful poem, Harry! Janice

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/22/2021 2:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. I have not done one like this. I guess I need to learn more about this style. Enjoy your win/day/weekend with blessings.......................