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Awaits the Dawn

The Rose awaits dawn
Jewelled tears to soothe
bird upon the wing
calls out reveille
waning moon exits.

The breeze whispers
spirit so free
shakes new born leaves
rustles the tide.

Morning breaks
azure sky
hides the stars.

Nature's
habit.

Pure.

 © Harry J Horsman 2021

Copyright © Harry Horsman | Year Posted 2021

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Lisa Ricci Date: 12/19/2021 8:50:00 AM Hello hh - This entry is poetic in every way starting with the title. Truly. We see the beauty of nature and its transformation of life and beauty. Be very proud of this entry and your poetic execution. Further, this is one of those entries that should be read out loud with emphasis and expression. Thank you for sharing with us. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and your family. Peace and blessings always. Login to Reply

Brian Sambourne Date: 8/22/2021 9:06:00 PM Wonderful, Harry. The brevity of your lines has such impact. A grand read my friend. Congratulations! Stay healthy. Cheers, Brian Login to Reply

D.W. Rodgers Date: 1/24/2021 6:07:00 AM Lovely, congrats on your win Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 1/23/2021 9:38:00 AM Pure beauty of words flowing gracefully from the dawn Harry. You have really captured the "pure" of each sunrise. Congratulations on your first place win! Login to Reply

Beata Agustin Date: 1/23/2021 3:08:00 AM Wow! Congrats! God bless you. Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 1/23/2021 1:25:00 AM Excellent, but why am I surprised? Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 1/22/2021 7:14:00 PM Harry, I was a pleased to read your Diminished Hexaverse with great imagery and flow . Congratulations on your winning write. Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 1/22/2021 6:53:00 PM WoW! Harry, This is a fine piece of poetry! It's just breathtaking. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a great evening:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 1/22/2021 3:07:00 PM CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this beautiful poem, Harry! Janice Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/22/2021 2:32:00 PM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. I have not done one like this. I guess I need to learn more about this style. Enjoy your win/day/weekend with blessings....................... Login to Reply

Panagiota Romios Date: 1/12/2021 9:32:00 AM Delightful, Harry Pangie Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/9/2021 5:30:00 AM Very descriptive and expressive work with so few words. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/9/2021 4:22:00 AM Un bons reveille mon cher ami, you awaken the poet in me, with your words of beauty, Have a good day dear Harry, keep penning, xo Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/8/2021 4:28:00 PM simply gorgeous, my friend!! Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/8/2021 7:05:00 AM I love how the breeze shakes newborn leaves and rustles the tides. Lovely imagery! Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 1/6/2021 8:49:00 AM I love the habits of nature. Well written Harry :) Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 1/6/2021 7:43:00 AM Well done, Harry, love the feel of the poem and imagery, Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 1/6/2021 4:38:00 AM an absolute gem Harry, i too chose a nature theme:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Akkina Downing Date: 1/5/2021 6:12:00 PM Just beautiful, Harry :) Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 1/5/2021 3:00:00 PM Beautiful Harry. Love it. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/5/2021 12:08:00 PM - Really pure and beautiful poem, Harry - Luck in the contest :) - Happy new year, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/5/2021 7:31:00 AM The beautiful time of day as the sun is getting ready to rise, great imagery Harry and good luck in the contest.. Tom Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/5/2021 4:51:00 AM Beautiful poetry, Harry. Loved it. Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 1/5/2021 4:14:00 AM Yes. Nature is pure. I love this. It breathes joy. Inspiring. God bless you Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/5/2021 1:30:00 AM Excellent dm. The rose always attracts poetry. Best for a win. Login to Reply