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Awaiting Spring's Arrival

River's gallant run,
its princely banks blooming weeds,
dry when summer peaks;
like the autumn's barren trees
awaiting spring's arrival.

September 29, 2017
Placed 3rd: March 2019 week 3 contest by Brian Strand

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Brandy Nicole Date: 3/21/2019 11:02:00 AM The wait is over!!! Spring is here! :) I love the way you express these moments. Beautiful in every way. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy Login to Reply

Suzanne Delaney Date: 10/31/2017 3:32:00 PM Love your nature poems, Hugs, SuZ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/31/2017 3:55:00 PM Thank you SuZ!

Harshita Chaudhary Date: 10/1/2017 9:37:00 AM This is a beautiful poem. It is true, everybody wants the spring to come early. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 10/1/2017 11:17:00 AM Thank you--appreciate your comments, Harshita!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/30/2017 8:10:00 PM a Beauty! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/30/2017 8:39:00 PM Thank you Andrea!

Heidi Sands Date: 9/30/2017 6:44:00 AM This is so nice to read today Vijay! :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/30/2017 7:59:00 AM Thanks Heidi!

Eve Roper Date: 9/29/2017 5:33:00 PM Oh, love this one a lot of imagery,,,, Vijay Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/29/2017 5:35:00 PM Thanks Eve!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/29/2017 6:57:00 AM Love the second line! Another great one, Vijay! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/29/2017 8:15:00 AM Thanks Kim!

Russell Sivey Date: 9/29/2017 5:40:00 AM This is a true Tanka! It's dedicated to nature and referencing human occurrences throughout life! I really enjoyed reading you delightful poem here this morning my friend! Such a grand piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/29/2017 5:55:00 AM Thank you Russell for your upbeat feedback this morning -- a joy to read!