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Awaiting Spring's Arrival

River's gallant run, its princely banks blooming weeds, dry when summer peaks; like the autumn's barren trees awaiting spring's arrival. September 29, 2017 Placed 3rd: March 2019 week 3 contest by Brian Strand

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/21/2019 11:02:00 AM

The wait is over!!! Spring is here! :) I love the way you express these moments. Beautiful in every way. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. ~ Brandy

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/31/2017 3:32:00 PM

Love your nature poems, Hugs, SuZ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/31/2017 3:55:00 PM

Thank you SuZ!

Harshita Chaudhary

Date: 10/1/2017 9:37:00 AM

This is a beautiful poem. It is true, everybody wants the spring to come early.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/1/2017 11:17:00 AM

Thank you--appreciate your comments, Harshita!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/30/2017 8:10:00 PM

a Beauty!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/30/2017 8:39:00 PM

Thank you Andrea!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/30/2017 6:44:00 AM

This is so nice to read today Vijay! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/30/2017 7:59:00 AM

Thanks Heidi!

Eve Roper

Date: 9/29/2017 5:33:00 PM

Oh, love this one a lot of imagery,,,, Vijay Hugs Eve ~`*

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/29/2017 5:35:00 PM

Thanks Eve!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/29/2017 6:57:00 AM

Love the second line! Another great one, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/29/2017 8:15:00 AM

Thanks Kim!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/29/2017 5:40:00 AM

This is a true Tanka! It's dedicated to nature and referencing human occurrences throughout life! I really enjoyed reading you delightful poem here this morning my friend! Such a grand piece, Great Work!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/29/2017 5:55:00 AM

Thank you Russell for your upbeat feedback this morning -- a joy to read!