Nette Onclaud Poet Quintain (English)

Awaiting Quiet Hour

The hour arrives when moon and sky unfold

as prelude between day and eve awakes;

till hand of sunset bids goodbye, consoled

and quietude lingers before  dawn breaks

endowing soft pause,   mending workload's aches.





( Not entered in contest)
Any poem in June not for a contest-- for Laura Loo
Written 6/11/2017  Submitted 7/2/2017

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Robert Lindley August 1, 2017 at 12:24 PM As a long cool breeze passing by on a blazing hot August day, this beautiful peace, exudes an aura of calmness and serenity. A fav my friend and a true pleasure to read.

Andrew Crisci July 5, 2017 at 10:27 AM Greetings, Nette. Congratulations on your placement in Laura's contest. You ignate the spark of imagination so vividly with your introspection of serenity and beauty. Thanks for your comment on my poem yesterday. Keep your magical pen flowing! I had a wonderful Independence Day, the fireworks In New York City, as every year, were spectacular! Have a Happy Wednesday. Hugs, Andrew.

John Hamilton July 4, 2017 at 10:24 AM Wow, such a serene write, congrats on a fine placement in Laura's contest!

Winged Warrior June 12, 2017 at 11:06 AM You certainly have a way with words my friend...anything you must write...comes out a poem...god bless...^WW^

Eve Roper June 11, 2017 at 10:54 PM Such a beautiful painting, Nette... good luck in the contest. a winner already ~*

Freddie Robinson Jr. June 11, 2017 at 1:18 PM I agree w/Banjo totally. Spiritually medicinal poetry, Nette. Extraordinarily serene. Soft, flowing verses that sing of tranquility. Pure poetry, lady. Love always.

Banjo Casto June 11, 2017 at 1:07 PM This enchanting poem has a meditative aura about it. I feel the serenity; thank you!

Daniel Turner June 11, 2017 at 9:09 AM Watching the sun rise and/or set can be very inspirational, rejuvenating the soul to face another day. Lovely verse, nette:)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2017 at 7:24 AM - Beautiful and peaceful poem, Nette - Good luck in the contest - Happy Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan June 11, 2017 at 5:15 AM Such a soothing write... Loved it... Reads like a winner... Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece...

Ashley Conte June 11, 2017 at 4:38 AM You give tranquility a more exquisite meaning. How magical is this poem!

John Hardison June 11, 2017 at 12:59 AM Thank much for your beautifully written Quintain. Think you have a winner. 7 Peace, Love and Joy.

Arthur Vaso June 11, 2017 at 12:32 AM Such beautiful prose, so relaxing, I hope Broken Wings enjoys this as well! Hugs!