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Awaiting Admittance Haiku

a gentle dew drop
slides softly down the petal
awaits admittance

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Joe Maverick

June 10, 2011 at 3:32 PM

Enjoyed the verbal picture here Tahera, and congrats on the placement win..!

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 9, 2011 at 10:08 AM

Accept my congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Tahera

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 9, 2011 at 7:29 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's "Haiku~Crazy" contest Tahera. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

June 9, 2011 at 2:00 AM

well deserving of the award! grrreat stuff, tahera... : ) huggs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

June 8, 2011 at 11:26 PM

beautiful, beautiful haiku! Love how you portrayed this dew drop :) Super enjoyed this one, Tahera, congrats on your win :D

Poet Destroyer A

June 8, 2011 at 10:33 PM

Tahera! Congratulations!!!! Thank you for the awesome haiku's and supporting my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 8, 2011 at 8:56 PM

Congrats Tahera on your super duper win in the Haiku contes with these glorious ones luv..

Andrea Dietrich

June 8, 2011 at 8:46 PM

this was so precious, Tahera. One of my favorites of the single haiku on the list! Congratulations.

February 24, 2011 at 4:34 PM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 16, 2011 at 11:10 PM

I was expecting some sort of exam when I first read the title but I got such a pleasant surprise with this-- very pretty Tahera :)

Joe Inka

February 16, 2011 at 8:33 PM

Wow!! to me this poem speaks of water to flower. But sings of man to a woman. This could be my favorite Haiku of all.

Poet Destroyer A

February 15, 2011 at 1:26 PM

Good day Tahera, how are you I hope you had a wonderful valentines,, stopping by to enjoy your haiku,,, nice,..p.d.

Constance La France

February 15, 2011 at 5:50 AM

so alluring and winsome and lovely, a beauty~~

Sara Kendrick

February 15, 2011 at 4:40 AM

Good one..Enjoyed..Sara

John Rhinem

February 14, 2011 at 5:22 PM

S*M*I*L*E ~ "H*A*P*P*Y V*A*L*E*N*T*I*N*E*S D*A*Y M*Y D*E*A*R,,,B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L```T*A*H*E*R*A M*A*N*N*A*N¤¤¤'L*O*V*E,,,J*O*H*N!!!:))) ~

Audrey Haick

February 14, 2011 at 3:55 PM

Ah, awesome imagery, Tahera...I can picture the sun rising warming the atmosphere and the drop sliding....Lovely Haiku. Always, Annalise

Deb Radke

February 14, 2011 at 1:04 PM

Beautifully written, Tahera. Thank you for all the kind comments you have written about my poetry. It means a great deal that you take time to let me know how you feel about my work. Best wishes to you. Love, Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 14, 2011 at 5:35 AM

Am also waiting Tahera my friend and wrote a Spring poem too but just posted my Happy Valentine's Day one first.. so enjoy your H.V.D. with lots of luv.. am inspired by your lovely Haiku ..

Robert A. Dufresne

February 14, 2011 at 5:26 AM

This one has me smiling this morning Tahera. Very very thought provoking and imaginative and yes ..perfectly poetic... into my favs

Carolyn Devonshire

February 14, 2011 at 3:25 AM

You haiku has a lovely image, Tahera, and also reminds me how much we all need nourishment. Beautifully stated! Love and best wishes for a happy Valentine's Day, Carolyn