Avian Legos

...to the finessed fowl
humming by my ear      tell me
Did anyone ever tell you
just how glad they are
to have you here?

Poignant eyes, azure crown,
that lightasapenny frame...
(how monstrous we must appear!
our human eyes like soccer balls)
We have only God to blame...

...and our senses to thank
for perceiving such a lovely scene
right here in our midst:
organic motors in a danceswirlblur,
taking quicksips of wine
through a toothpick straw
(do I need to make a list?)

Well, how about this:
pleasantly economical,
tenderly blue-breasted,
(quicker than a shuriken star?
you guessed it!)

And O how I would shield you
from anything that came your way
My palms would be your perch...
My fingers be your bars...

But alas, none such as you,
could ever be cast into a cage

(for the angels would rage!
and even the most committed readers
would surely turn the page)

But rest assured
I wouldn't dream deprive you of your feast
of purple watermelon splendor
(those pretty pearls of amethyst
are yours to conquer!)

O Caffeinated Contraption...
O Sweet Dream of Buzzing Thoughts...

You could be crushed like a pop can
at the flippant cruelty of man...

      ...but who would dare?

blasphemy to merely think it,
'twould be an acceptable breach of free speech
to burn the words that expressed it

(fly free, oh sweet heresy,
into the ashen breeze)

"There's nothing more beautiful than you."
said the God
who placed each feather in
with such gingercare
and thoughtful pause--

(His Cosmic Hands caught
in the Avian Lego Jar,
smirking at the plasticity
of His own laws)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ashley Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 7:56 AM
Ah, dear Timothy, once again, the deep-reaching depth of thought and ethereal expanse of your imaginative artistry takes my breath away! A magical blend of intellect, opinion and brilliant art! There are so many nooks and crannies in this poem where my heart's imagination lingered to savor your poetic ingenuity. A fav, of course.. and so is the hummingbird! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Hicks Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 4:40 PM
I think your comment, in and of itself, is worthy of poetic praise. Thanks so much for the detailed feedback ... greatly appreciated!
Hawkens Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 7:00 PM
Wow, Your poem has wings. The words just fly off the page. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD.
Hicks Avatar
May 11, 2020 at 12:18 PM
Thank you kindly JC! Nice to meet you.
Callus Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award, Timothy. I love how you tackled this avian theme with such creativity, while not fearing to express thoughts which might seem contrary to orthodox opinion. The overall content is worthy of a double read...the end part superb! ~ Regards // paul
Hicks Avatar
May 11, 2020 at 12:17 PM
Ahhhh you've hit the nail on the head my friend. "not fearing to express thoughts which might seem contrary to orthodox opinion". I always try (but not always succeed) to see things in a new way! Thanks so much for your continual support.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2020 at 8:08 PM
I am back to congratulate you. It is no surprise this one was honored with POTD!
Hicks Avatar
May 11, 2020 at 12:16 PM
Thanks again Connie!
Adams Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 8:54 PM
wow... you have such a way with words, you lure the reader in and deliver... love it and congratulations on your POTD :) hugs
Hicks Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 9:58 PM
Thanks Sandra. I am honored.
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 4:02 PM
for me, All your poems are POTD. Congratulations, Timothy. To me this is the hummingbird. hope I got that right! Brilliant imagery aS ALWAYS
Hicks Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 9:58 PM
You are 100% correct about the hummingbird. Thanks again, my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 7:51 AM
This is a treat to read, Timothy! A lot of fun wordsmithing! Congratulations on POTD!
Hicks Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 9:57 PM
I'm glad you appreciated the "wordsmithing"... lately I've been trying to experiment in using made-up words and see where it takes me. It's fun to experiment.
Horsman Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 12:58 AM
Wow, Love this Tim, deserved POTD,,Long time no see. Stay Safe my friend..Harry
Hicks Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 9:56 PM
And you as well .. thanks Harry!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 10:52 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. The many shapes from Legos to work ones mind. Enjoy your day and win.........
Hicks Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 9:56 PM
Thanks Paula!
Godwin Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 8:57 PM
First, I've missed your face 'round these parts and was delighted to see it on one of Andrea's poems that I just read. Welcome back to the front old top (I'm not really that corny but I do grow silly when the hours grows late.) This is an impressive poem, love some word pairings especially much and applause on the imagery. Truly good to have your talent and attitudes once again enhancing our Soup. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Hicks Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 9:56 PM
What a sweet friend you are to welcome me back after all these years ... thanks ever so much for the stop!
Roper Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 8:41 PM
Hello, Timothy, great write my friend. congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 8:05 PM
Thank you Eve.
Nicole Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 8:30 PM
Whether it is a bird of ones imagination, or of God's creation. Your words have wings, and I am there in the wind. Congratulations Timothy, on Poem of the Day. : ) Brandy
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 8:04 PM
Thanks for the double-dip in the comment section (I'm not a germaphobe .... I won't tell anyone ... lol!) Thanks for the congrats.
Pandit Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 5:55 PM
I am so happy to have read your poetry today. I am delighted to get to know your splendid artistic work. BIG congrats on poem of the day, Tim.
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 8:04 PM
Thanks again for your lovely comments, Vijay.
Watt Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 5:39 PM
Loved your flight of fancy tribute to your hummingbird friends; so very imaginative in thought and style, Timothy. Great to have you back at PS. Congrats on your double play today with both POTD and POTW! Well done, poet. ~ John
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 8:03 PM
I was not expecting either honor, but I'm certainly happy about it! I am glad all by descriptive hints lead you to envision hummingbird (without explicitly saying so!)
Kauffman Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 12:19 PM
A richly crafted reflection on the stunning beauty found in all of God's creation especially the "Avian Lego jar." Congratulations on your POTD Timothy.
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 8:02 PM
Thanks Sam!
Proxenos Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 11:25 AM
I always read through all the comments before I began to comment on anyone's poem - lego my oh my - , such finery, and imagination, such flair and craftsmanship. Kudos Timothy and congratulations on POTD, an honor truly deserved for a fascinating poem. Blessings, Jennifer.
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 8:02 PM
Thanks Jennifer. My goal is to fascinate (if possible) ... glad to know that mark has been reached here.
Michael Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 9:16 AM
Creatively inspired writing...this is art...Congratulations Timothy on POTD...Well done
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 8:00 PM
How kind of you to say, Arturo. And nice to meet you!
Lawless Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 7:50 AM
Tim, that final stanza sums it all up in a creative metaphor. Great job
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 8:00 PM
Thanks so much John. You hit the nail on the head as that's what I was ultimately going for :)
Deo Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 7:31 AM
Tim, thanks for beautiful diction, scenes, meditations ... "way" instead of "away," in this somewhat sadly romantic (for Nature) line: "And O how I would shield you from anything that came your away ..." ? (Happier that I followed my beautiful Sis Mo, here)
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 7:59 PM
Nice to meet you Anil ... and thanks for the correction (good eye!) I appreciate constructive criticism :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 6:54 AM
My mind is buzzing full of hummingbirds sweet nectar dripping from my neural network loving this! Spectacular poem Timothy! Congratulations on POTD! This is going into my faves vault for safe keeping. Thank you! Have a wonderful day, xomo
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 7:58 PM
Ahhh ... happy to see your face bless my page, Mrs Firehair :) You are the FIRST one to catch on to the species of bird: hummingbird! A very astute observational reader you are. Thank you!
Warrior Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 5:02 AM
Great read my friend...welcome back and Congrats!! on POTD!!...cheers and best wishes from the Wingster :o)
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 7:57 PM
Thanks Mr. Winster-Warrior, Sir. Much obliged!
One Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 4:29 AM
So this is about a plastic lego bird? Is that correct? An interesting insight into your head here lol.. You have a great imagination for a poet and always love how you format your poems Tim... A brilliant choice for POTD... Congrats. It is great to have you back and long may your pen flood these pages..
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 7:57 PM
If taken literally, yes (my mind's eye gravitated towards the metaphorical however). Thanks as always for the stop, Silent.
Theraven Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 10:28 PM
Timothy, This is wonderful prose. What would we give to exchange hands for wings, nose for beak, and ears for feathered braces. Mr. Potato Head, the original Lego changeling, might just pull it off. May the Fourth be with you. -Richard
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 7:55 PM
Well hello again, Raven. (the original Lego changeling ... ha! You're a clever one :) ) ....
Nicole Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 11:06 PM
:) May the 4th be with you too.
Nicole Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 9:00 PM
Oh my!! Your Words give me Wings and I am soaring through the Sapphire Blue. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. I love the way your thoughts take me there in the moment. Freedom to Fly. Yes!! :) No cage needed. You are such a talented writer Timothy. :) Brandy
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 7:54 PM
Brandy ... I so appreciate your exuberant and thoughtful comments. Thank you.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 8:16 AM
Another contender for POTW. I am running out of descriptors to praise your Artistry. I so enjoyed this read.
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 7:54 PM
Thanks Richard. Unbeknownst to me ... it became POTD. I am humbled.
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