Avia

I went down the stairs before
The light went out

                       My urge more than a mark
                       The territorial pet sprays
                       The stoic silence of trees
                       I washed my hands
                       And clean of fear
                       Turned to the stair again

I rose each flight
To take the space
Reserved in my class
For those on the edge
Of belonging
And care

                       The darkness bosomed me
                       I yielded
                       To the succulence
                       Of your mouth
                       Waiting in the silence
                       To initiate
                       Surprise
                       Face to face with your planned desire
    
I learned a lot day
At school
For your perfect smile
Had false
Dentures glistening
White
On the darkness of my eyes

                           A first kiss
                           Is a stairway to understanding
                           How we
                           Having climbed no higher
                           Than that moment
                           Remained devoted
                           Until you expired.

Your husband cried not I
I stare at the muted darkness still.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 4/19/2009 7:47:00 PM
Beautiful stanza.
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Date: 4/19/2009 11:13:00 AM
Awsome writing. I sense the loss here. And pray that your darkness will lift. Keep writing. Thanks for you comment on my poem. God Bless you, Dane
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Date: 4/19/2009 2:27:00 AM
a very lovely writing David ... the last line is brilliantly beautiful! and so is the stanza 'a frist kiss .. is a stairway to understanding' ... some really wonderful lines in your writing ... so is AVIA ... the name of the person this writing is about?!? ... anyway ... take care! ~ Arany
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Date: 4/18/2009 2:17:00 PM
brought back memories in my teens,stolen kiss in the dark,fancying our teachers,i liked the last 2verses your husband cried not i,i stare at the muted darkness still.well penned my friend
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