Avatar Star

Distant space departing realms of conscious warmth
Voicing reason to an end within the persons hearth
 A fire with pit to poke and prod dissolving spirit 
Harmed retreated into a place where safe
The Avatar a being that searched far beyond limited view

Star that gazed a return to the night in day
Avatar that watches from the darkness kept at edges bay
Deep under a surface of skin flushed heat
A spirit that flees instead of the fight to escape

Soaring the magnitude of magnetic divines
An Avatar without wings that carelessly takes flight
Hovering not high not low always an even around
This lumen of light that is profoundly weighted 

Shining use of a rise up from the depths of body down
The Avatar does speak to encourage the voice of sound
Direction of the pointer towards the feeling of no despair
A spiritual intertwining of the beings loving care 

Body of vapored essence that is temporarily filled
By the choices lead through the heart that is felt
Releasing pressures built long lasted to with stand and resist
Temptation of the Avatars love that was heaven sent 


'Avatar Entry' Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 5:56 PM
Great write, Kristina,congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*
Barden Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 6:37 AM
This is so thoughtful and intelligent, Kristina, and very much like the way I think (and dream) most of the time - my head spinning in a hundred ways, analyzing everything, processing ... it wears me down sometimes, but this is much the positive aspects of integral acumen and cognition. What a wonderful penning - loved this, and much of your work speaks to me. Congrats and blessings for your win! :-) <3
Gauthier Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 11:40 PM
Wonderful imagery. Thanks for your entry and Congrats on your win, Kristina.
Talbot Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 6:53 PM
Inspirational, great depth, O yes! Heaven sent! Good luck with the contest Kristina;) :)
Whitmore Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 8:56 PM
Thanks for your comment Mick! Appreciate the luck!
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 5:09 AM
Such depth of perception this elevating raising of consciousness poem be, Kristina. It is the first poem of yours I've read ... very impressive existential musings. Cosmic poetry brilliance from your glistening pen. May love light your path always.
Whitmore Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 11:35 AM
This was the first you read! Well then you have read many of my writings and I truly appreciate this being the first. It is poetically awing in a description of an avatar divine being for a contest and I loved to imagine letting my writer flow with topic. Thanks for love light that does guide me and I hope my writings guide others after reading. XO
One Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 8:40 AM
This is a beautiful poem, what a wonderful avatar that would be.. nice flowing poem with great imagery...
Whitmore Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 12:57 PM
An Avatar just one of many in poetic vision. Thanks for enjoying the being shaped by my thoughts and words.
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