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Ava's Castle

For Princess Ava I designed a place, Where secret gardens kept still blossom bright, And weeds imposing threats of my disgrace, Lie far below her royal candlelight; By doves constructed high in pastel skies, Upon a lilac cloud of feathered dreams, Is seen for her who sees through daughter’s eyes, A castle built too long ago, it seems; And though she’s yet to claim her tiny throne, For under lock and key she serves a queen, In time all petals nestle flowers grown, And famished skies rejoice no longer lean. ‘Til then in patience for the love still had, Awaiting precious eyes that call me “dad”.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/11/2016 12:37:00 AM
I pray that she comes to play in her castle, Phillip:) beautiful sonnet:)
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Date: 10/31/2016 6:11:00 PM
Forget the 'weeds' and the 'queen' Phillip in time this precious little flower will blossom and love will bloom I'm her dad's garden:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/31/2016 10:30:00 AM
From one father to another, this is beautiful and perfection all the way through.
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Date: 10/31/2016 9:38:00 AM
This is farthermost beautiful! Brought a tear to my eye, you're an old softy, and it's grand!
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Date: 10/31/2016 9:30:00 AM
I've said it before, there is no love like a daddy daughter love. Sweet write my friend:)
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Date: 10/31/2016 8:58:00 AM
- Beautiful written, Phillip - A pleasure to read :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/31/2016 4:45:00 AM
A beautiful sonnet Phillip! Lovely indeed
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