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Avalanche

snow bank breaks free its quickly racing downward all buried in its path

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/5/2016 10:24:00 PM
Very nice piece.
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Pam Deremer
Date: 7/5/2016 10:33:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/26/2016 6:10:00 PM
Pam a lovely haiku, deep imagery....skat
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Pam Deremer
Date: 5/29/2016 4:56:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/19/2016 11:41:00 AM
Such powerful imagery in so few words - great poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Pam Deremer
Date: 5/19/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thank you so much.
Date: 5/16/2016 7:07:00 PM
Nice haiku Pam.
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Pam Deremer
Date: 5/17/2016 11:58:00 AM
Thank you very much for the comment.
Date: 5/16/2016 6:01:00 PM
Very well described. Nice Haiku. God Bless, JB
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Pam Deremer
Date: 5/17/2016 11:57:00 AM
Thank you very much.