Avalanche

snow bank breaks free

its quickly racing downward

all buried in its path
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hauser  Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 10:24 PM
Very nice piece.
Deremer Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 10:33 PM
Thank you.
A  Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 6:10 PM
Pam a lovely haiku, deep imagery....skat
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May 29, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Thank you.
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 11:41 AM
Such powerful imagery in so few words - great poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Deremer Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Thank you so much.
Gazbowski Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 7:07 PM
Nice haiku Pam.
Deremer Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Thank you very much for the comment.
Ball Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 6:01 PM
Very well described. Nice Haiku. God Bless, JB
Deremer Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Thank you very much.
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