Avalanche

snow bank breaks free its quickly racing downward all buried in its path

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Mike Hauser

Date: 7/5/2016 10:24:00 PM

Very nice piece.

Pam Deremer
Date: 7/5/2016 10:33:00 PM

Thank you.

Skat A

Date: 5/26/2016 6:10:00 PM

Pam a lovely haiku, deep imagery....skat

Pam Deremer
Date: 5/29/2016 4:56:00 PM

Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/19/2016 11:41:00 AM

Such powerful imagery in so few words - great poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Pam Deremer
Date: 5/19/2016 12:28:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/16/2016 7:07:00 PM

Nice haiku Pam.

Pam Deremer
Date: 5/17/2016 11:58:00 AM

Thank you very much for the comment.

Judy Ball

Date: 5/16/2016 6:01:00 PM

Very well described. Nice Haiku. God Bless, JB

Pam Deremer
Date: 5/17/2016 11:57:00 AM

Thank you very much.