Avalanche

How does it feel to be loved? Is it a mere feeling or something more divine does it even exist in the real world maybe I wish I had 'that' someone I could call mine. How does it feel to be desired? Is it lust or something beyond obsession can that thirst even be satiated maybe I just crave that kind of touch. How does it feel to belong? is it what people call home can someone truly find 'the one' maybe I just want to escape this raging storm. How can I deny these feelings surfing up never knew I would wish these upon never felt this empty, this null maybe I hope I soon find my own dusk til' dawn.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 8/13/2024 7:08:00 AM

a heartfelt poem ~ congrats on your 1st place finish

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/23/2024 10:00:00 AM

I think we all crave the closeness that loving offers us, the bonging to someone or something greater than ourselves. You've started this desire well and I hope you find what you seek. Sometimes it isn't a person we are looking for. We each have a God shaped hole in our hearts That only He can fill. However you understand that idea, I pray you find what u seek! Xoxo

Nex Dan
Date: 7/24/2024 4:59:00 AM

Thanks a lot for such a beautiful note.

Silent One

Date: 7/22/2024 11:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Nex Dan
Date: 7/24/2024 5:00:00 AM

Thank you:)))