Avalanche

Crystal Glaze Shines Bright,
As The Rushing Force Crashes;
Downhill Fall Of Snow.

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Carolyn Devonshire

February 14, 2009 at 4:31 PM

Tyler, I can see this very clearly in your brilliant words! Thanks for sharing it, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

January 28, 2009 at 7:15 AM

Ok, those in the not know have to know (duck) why are you capitalizing the words? Light & LOve Debbie Guzzi

Robin L. Gass

January 16, 2009 at 11:05 AM

Wow! A vivid rush of white. Awesome picture you have painted, Tyler. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I certainly will try to enjoy and create today. Love, Robin

Deirdre Omaidin

January 16, 2009 at 9:40 AM

Wonderful image portrayed here, very keen haiku. Déirdre Ó Maidín

Christopher Higgins

January 16, 2009 at 9:39 AM

I love the imagery in this well written haiku. Great job and thanks for reading my work.

Serenity D'Nae Montgomery

January 16, 2009 at 9:23 AM

lol... thanks for the comment! I hav a thing for guys named tyler lol

Serenity D'Nae Montgomery

January 16, 2009 at 9:08 AM

Beautiful write :) Love always, Serenity

Danielle Moreno

January 15, 2009 at 4:21 PM

THAT IS A REALLY COOL AND GOOD POEM ............DANIELLE

Elizabeth Neal

January 15, 2009 at 1:23 PM

I love the snow, but it can be so dangerous. Nice haiku, can't wait to read more. Elizabeth

Daniel Neal

January 14, 2009 at 4:48 PM

Wow, nice work Tyler, keep it up, I enjoyed reading this haiku. DN

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 13, 2009 at 9:51 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup Tyler. I hope to read more poetry from you. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

January 12, 2009 at 4:36 PM

As much as I love snow, and as beautiful and fascinating as it may look from afar, it could be and has been disastrous for many. Great haiku! Love, Shar