Avalanche

Crystal Glaze Shines Bright, As The Rushing Force Crashes; Downhill Fall Of Snow.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/14/2009 4:31:00 PM

Tyler, I can see this very clearly in your brilliant words! Thanks for sharing it, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/28/2009 7:15:00 AM

Ok, those in the not know have to know (duck) why are you capitalizing the words? Light & LOve Debbie Guzzi

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/16/2009 11:05:00 AM

Wow! A vivid rush of white. Awesome picture you have painted, Tyler. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I certainly will try to enjoy and create today. Love, Robin

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/16/2009 9:40:00 AM

Wonderful image portrayed here, very keen haiku. Déirdre Ó Maidín

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/16/2009 9:39:00 AM

I love the imagery in this well written haiku. Great job and thanks for reading my work.

Serenity D'Nae Montgomery

Date: 1/16/2009 9:23:00 AM

lol... thanks for the comment! I hav a thing for guys named tyler lol

Serenity D'Nae Montgomery

Date: 1/16/2009 9:08:00 AM

Beautiful write :) Love always, Serenity

Danielle Moreno

Date: 1/15/2009 4:21:00 PM

THAT IS A REALLY COOL AND GOOD POEM ............DANIELLE

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 1/15/2009 1:23:00 PM

I love the snow, but it can be so dangerous. Nice haiku, can't wait to read more. Elizabeth

Daniel Neal

Date: 1/14/2009 4:48:00 PM

Wow, nice work Tyler, keep it up, I enjoyed reading this haiku. DN

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/13/2009 9:51:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup Tyler. I hope to read more poetry from you. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/12/2009 4:36:00 PM

As much as I love snow, and as beautiful and fascinating as it may look from afar, it could be and has been disastrous for many. Great haiku! Love, Shar

Abe Lopez

Date: 1/12/2009 3:35:00 PM

How can something so beautiful be so dangerous at the same time...........Nice

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/11/2009 4:11:00 PM

Nature fascinates with its destruction. Great haiku from a young master. Keep amazing us with your work...Raul