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Autumns Paradox

Autumns leaves fall from a tree Swiftly drifting further from me Autumn feels of home Out of pace breathing under bone Lay here hurting itching bleeding Just a life distracted releasing Although i wonder in disbilief Just wanna carry weight for grief Blood soaked hands of late Running reverse collapse of fate Lies distorted of formalities Corpses pain my moralities Suit up and stand still The devils breath a chill Dancing with men who scorns Scalps worn on above their horns Forgotten as a faulty dream Ruptured vein saturated scream Believe in hate anomaly Repeat the void constantly...

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Date: 7/23/2016 8:55:00 PM
Patrick,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/18/2016 12:34:00 PM
Patrick, Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 7/18/2016 2:21:00 AM
Patrick, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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