Autumns Paradox

Autumns leaves fall from a tree
Swiftly drifting further from me
Autumn feels of home
Out of pace breathing under bone
Lay here hurting itching bleeding
Just a life distracted releasing
Although i wonder in disbilief 
Just wanna carry weight for grief
Blood soaked hands of late
Running reverse collapse of fate
Lies distorted of formalities 
Corpses pain my moralities
Suit up and stand still
The devils breath a chill
Dancing with men who scorns
Scalps worn on above their horns
Forgotten as a faulty dream
Ruptured vein saturated scream
Believe in hate anomaly
Repeat the void constantly...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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July 23, 2016 at 8:55 PM
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July 18, 2016 at 12:34 PM
Patrick, Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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July 18, 2016 at 2:21 AM
Patrick, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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