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Autumns Golds Drift

Saddening dark trunks Now naked skeletal lone Whilst Autumns golds drift

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 9/9/2010 11:54:00 AM
Loved your imagery..its melancholic and beautiful at the same time...wonderful:) Emilia
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Date: 9/8/2010 3:56:00 PM
p.s. the waterfall is right downtown so we don't use it much anymore
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Date: 9/8/2010 6:15:00 AM
A nice haiku with apt images well expressed, James
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Date: 9/8/2010 5:30:00 AM
James, I love your use of similes in your Haiku .. enjoy your Wednesday :) ~ Wilma
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Date: 9/7/2010 8:44:00 PM
lovely haiku
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Date: 9/7/2010 3:02:00 PM
Come to Florida, James. The leaves stay on most of the trees year-round. Your lovely haiku makes me miss the change of seasons. Plans are being made to return to NJ in a couple of weeks. Then I'll even be able to see snow this winter! Enjoyed your haiku. Love, Carolyn
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