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Autumns Golds Drift

Saddening dark trunks Now naked skeletal lone Whilst Autumns golds drift http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-11.php

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De R

Date: 9/9/2010 11:54:00 AM

Loved your imagery..its melancholic and beautiful at the same time...wonderful:) Emilia

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/8/2010 3:56:00 PM

p.s. the waterfall is right downtown so we don't use it much anymore

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/8/2010 6:15:00 AM

A nice haiku with apt images well expressed, James

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/8/2010 5:30:00 AM

James, I love your use of similes in your Haiku .. enjoy your Wednesday :) ~ Wilma

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/7/2010 8:44:00 PM

lovely haiku

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/7/2010 3:02:00 PM

Come to Florida, James. The leaves stay on most of the trees year-round. Your lovely haiku makes me miss the change of seasons. Plans are being made to return to NJ in a couple of weeks. Then I'll even be able to see snow this winter! Enjoyed your haiku. Love, Carolyn