Autumns Golds Drift

Saddening dark trunks Now naked skeletal lone Whilst Autumns golds drift http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-11.php
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 9, 2010 at 11:54 AM
Loved your imagery..its melancholic and beautiful at the same time...wonderful:) Emilia
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September 8, 2010 at 3:56 PM
p.s. the waterfall is right downtown so we don't use it much anymore
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September 8, 2010 at 6:15 AM
A nice haiku with apt images well expressed, James
Neels Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 5:30 AM
James, I love your use of similes in your Haiku .. enjoy your Wednesday :) ~ Wilma
Roberts Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 8:44 PM
lovely haiku
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September 7, 2010 at 3:02 PM
Come to Florida, James. The leaves stay on most of the trees year-round. Your lovely haiku makes me miss the change of seasons. Plans are being made to return to NJ in a couple of weeks. Then I'll even be able to see snow this winter! Enjoyed your haiku. Love, Carolyn
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