Autumns Finch

Morning’s clarinet of feathers
over blunt autumn cold

Singing finch
scurry branch to branch

Southeastern’s feeble flame
burns November’s thin wick

In the air
blue ice whistles

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from my 6th book-length manuscript

©dah / dahlusion 2014, 2015 all rights reserved

"Autumn’s Finch" was first published in
'The Filid Anthology'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kamoonpuri Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 5:49 AM
Wow one of your best!!! So beautiful n poetic. Pleases both my bird lover and poetic heart . Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do comment my latest poem too.
Dahlusion Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 6:21 AM
I'm honored by this critique. Thank you! –-))
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