Autumn's Fall - Hiku

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*Image of Autumn Fall Leaves by Pixabay. Autumn's fall swell sails slip simply slowly sinking sunken strands spreading 2022 January 19

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Sotto Poet

Date: 1/19/2022 6:27:00 PM

William, you have written an adorable haiku. This was quite enjoyable for me.

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/19/2022 7:49:00 PM

A cute little ditty, Lasaad, if I must say so myself! Thanks, aplenty matey, ahoy and Aloha!

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/19/2022 4:32:00 PM

Beautiful William . I enjoyed this :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/19/2022 4:55:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi, for your supportive words my friend, Aloha!