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autumn's entrance

in change of season
autumn makes a grand entrance ~
with subtly chilled winds

twirl then arabesque
leaves are dancing a ballet ~
unscripted, unstaged

one last performance
their swan song without encore ~
bare, the maple limbs

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2024

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Sara Kendrick Date: 10/13/2024 5:29:00 AM Congratulations on your creative winning work. Way to go. Autumn is now upon us and the beauty is always new and fresh to me. Thanks for sharing your talent. Sara K Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/9/2024 10:48:00 PM Congrats on your well deserved win, Lin. Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 10/8/2024 12:42:00 PM Lin, congratulations on your first place win with your beautiful haiku set. Login to Reply

Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/25/2024 10:15:00 AM A wonderful Haiku trio for ‘autumn’s entrance’ Lin. All the best… Beryl Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 9/26/2024 8:03:00 AM Thanks a bunch for reading these Haiku, Beryl and for your well wishes.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/24/2024 1:12:00 PM This is very lovely. It's awesome reading all the autumn haiku around here. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 9/24/2024 2:38:00 PM Thank you, Andrea. It certainly has put me in a festive mood to welcome a cooling off period.

Suzanne Delaney Date: 9/24/2024 6:37:00 AM WOW Lin: I was struck by our similarity of theme for these haiku. You expressed them in such a blithe way. Great minds think almost alike eh? Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 9/24/2024 6:40:00 AM ;-) I'm not sure about the 'greatness' of my brain cells, but I can vouch for the sharpness of yours, so if you wish to compare us... I'm all for it. lol Thanks a lot, Suz.

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 9/21/2024 2:06:00 PM Dear Lin, your Haikus are amazing as the words arabesque around in twirling ways. Autumn is a my favorite and you make my joy even greater with these well inked Haikus. Good Luck on the contest! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 9/22/2024 5:54:00 PM I often feel falling leaves are dancing in air, as does a ballerina. Thank you ever so much for the kind comments, Daniel.

Jim Slaughter Date: 9/21/2024 9:44:00 AM These are lovely, Lin. BOL in the contest. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 9/22/2024 5:54:00 PM Thank you very much, Jim.

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/21/2024 9:12:00 AM haiku perfection Lin, won't be long before I'm out sweeping them up. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 9/21/2024 9:27:00 AM That's something I don't have to do. One of the few benefits of apartment living. Thank you, Tom.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 9/21/2024 8:54:00 AM Your "Autumn's Entrance" is a lovely write. It will be here very soon. What a pretty picture. "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one. Back with warm apple pie. Have a blessed/fun weekend................ Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 9/21/2024 9:26:00 AM Thank you, Paula for being such a supportive friend.

John Lawless Date: 9/21/2024 8:25:00 AM and a wonderful swan song it is Lin. Nice group of Haiku leafs adrift in our minds Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 9/21/2024 9:26:00 AM I always feel sad when I see them on the ground, crushed underfoot when once they swayed so beautifully on their trees. Thank you, John.