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This reminds me of some roads of my area..

Autumn's dream of a country road Where houses are few and moving slowed. Leaves are turning gold_ red_ burgundy. Inside a warm home apples are candy. In a barn or cellar cold winter foods quickly stowed Against winter's coming and inches snowed. Autumn dreams of snuggling nights when windy Breeze carries tune;close by snacks_ hot chocolate handy. Contest: Autumn's Dream Sponsor: ^Rick Parise Click on: "About This Poem"

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Date: 12/5/2017 5:23:00 PM
Autumn is like an artist who is arrogant; Had been handsome wherever he went; When he was done, Wrote another one; For each of them he had God's consent.
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Date: 6/17/2017 9:25:00 PM
Love it :)
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Date: 1/13/2016 1:57:00 PM
I like it. it makes me wish I was fishing at the lake my Dad would take us to as children. Good job! Come check out my work and drop me a line when you have a moment.
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Date: 12/29/2015 4:46:00 PM
I was raced in a small town with lots of back country roads brings back a memory of the past thanks for sharing
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Date: 12/29/2015 2:40:00 PM
Hi Sara: A poem reminiscent of a Rockwell illustration. great write!
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Date: 12/29/2015 12:58:00 PM
Hi Sara, Happy Holidays. Clearly this is a 7. Your natural skill and this poem have that "It" factor. What a joy to read. I like everything about it. It lends itself to a re-read. Have a great day and a Happy New Year. Earl
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Date: 1/3/2015 10:21:00 AM
I feel the warm coziness you painted, Sara.
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Date: 12/26/2014 9:41:00 PM
gosh, this is considered your second best poem at Soup and I can't believe I had not seen it before. It's really good, Sara.
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Date: 12/5/2014 9:55:00 PM
A great write my friend. This one made me homesick for our old home on the farm when I was a young kid. I dearly loved those woods behind the house and the fields out front! Adding this one to my fav list t and thanks for bringing back sweet memories!
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Date: 9/8/2014 12:40:00 AM
This tells me of experiences I know little about having always lived in a big city. Lovely words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/1/2011 1:02:00 PM
Oh, this is a wonderfully dreamy poem, Sara. I loved living in the country "where houses were few." You took me back to childhood days with the snow and the hot chocolate. Would you believe I never had a candy apple? Terrific entry for Rick's contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/1/2011 10:27:00 AM
Favorite time of year, too soon gone with all the lovely images you describe.
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Date: 11/1/2011 9:57:00 AM
Sara, thank you for your comments, as I resume again, and for a long time before....this art of yours above (to my favs) absolutely invites the reader to immerse in the dream described...pulled in very deep...had to shake my head to snap-out of it end of line 8! thanks! jimbo
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Date: 11/1/2011 8:50:00 AM
wow That road is very pretty... here in Texas.. you see nothing like that... Last year when i traveled to Oregon,.. the roads and breeze where as lovely as your poem...p.d.
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Date: 11/1/2011 8:27:00 AM
Mmmmmm! This sounds so warm and comfy. Loved the feel of this. It was like looking at a Norman Rockwell painting as I read. Great job here. A winner for sure. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/1/2011 3:56:00 AM
how lyrical and descriptive , sara.. makes me feel i'm there in the ecene.. lovely! missed ya; was out for a holiday to heal my allergy..:) winning wishes with hugggs!
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Date: 11/1/2011 1:54:00 AM
You've given a lively feel to it, Sarah. I hope you this one wins the contest
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Date: 10/31/2011 7:43:00 PM
* “Tis Feels Sooo Warm & Cozy Here Right Now * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Sara * As If Being Within The Right Place * Hot Chocolate & Quilted Blankets * Watching The Gentle Embers Rising to Swirl Amid The Firesplace * A Slice of Pie * Just Like A Dream * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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Date: 10/31/2011 4:51:00 PM
I live in the very hot country, were never the snow it does fall, and you sleep on top of the sheet, without any clothes at all... thats right ...summer time
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Date: 10/31/2011 3:10:00 PM
Great write here Sara! I really enjoyed the two lines, "Autumn's dream of a country road, Where houses are few and moving slowed" this is so very true...I go out to my elderly grandmothers house often and things do go slower out there and neighbors are in fact far apart! Such a perfect two lines!! Wonderful work!
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Date: 10/31/2011 2:47:00 PM
Yes, let's get cozy with this fine poem. Love, daver
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