Phyllis Babcock Poet Personification

Autumn's Dance

Sun-kissed autumn
colorful shimmering reflection
 closing season of woodland romance
hand in hand they dance
whirling and twirling
in a tango dance
pure levels of vibrating frequency
enchanted by naked beauty
the blushing of red hue
the shyness of oranges
 bashfulness of gold's glance
green remained neutral
not wanting to be free
dancing in the autumn breeze
with the other leaves.

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Jan Allison November 1, 2018 at 12:37 PM what lovely personification Phyllis, I do love this time of year:-) hugs Jan xx Phyllis Babcock November 1, 2018 at 6:37 PM thank you Jan. I read another poem using colors and this came into my head. love phyl

Lindsay Laurie October 3, 2018 at 5:58 PM Nice Phyllis … the picture of dancing leaves reminds me of times when pin oak and maple leaves danced up and down our street - thanks Phyllis - Lindsay Phyllis Babcock October 12, 2018 at 11:32 AM The leaves are almost off all the trees. My most depressing time of year. I miss the colors of summer and fall. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen September 29, 2018 at 1:01 PM - A beautiful tango dance, dear Phyllis - The fall here I live is usually brown wet leaves ... and cold wind from the north - We've already had our first storm / hurricane - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Phyllis Babcock September 30, 2018 at 4:50 PM Thank you Anne lise hope this reply comes thru as computer is acting up a bit. love phyl