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Autumn's Dance

Sun-kissed autumn colorful shimmering reflection closing season of woodland romance hand in hand they dance whirling and twirling in a tango dance pure levels of vibrating frequency enchanted by naked beauty the blushing of red hue the shyness of oranges bashfulness of gold's glance green remained neutral not wanting to be free dancing in the autumn breeze with the other leaves.

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/1/2018 12:37:00 PM

what lovely personification Phyllis, I do love this time of year:-) hugs Jan xx

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 11/1/2018 6:37:00 PM

thank you Jan. I read another poem using colors and this came into my head. love phyl

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/3/2018 5:58:00 PM

Nice Phyllis … the picture of dancing leaves reminds me of times when pin oak and maple leaves danced up and down our street - thanks Phyllis - Lindsay

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 10/12/2018 11:32:00 AM

The leaves are almost off all the trees. My most depressing time of year. I miss the colors of summer and fall. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/29/2018 1:01:00 PM

- A beautiful tango dance, dear Phyllis - The fall here I live is usually brown wet leaves ... and cold wind from the north - We've already had our first storm / hurricane - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/30/2018 4:50:00 PM

Thank you Anne lise hope this reply comes thru as computer is acting up a bit. love phyl