James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Autumn's Cool

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                   “Oh
        the return of crisp”
       so poetically she did
                   bide

                  Yesss
    hern smile was brilliant
                  yesss
    her chemise was softly
                  lucent
 divulging hern vivid beneath

    So I braved the return of 
            Autumn's cool
and hern breathtaking display

     covering her lucid hern

       with mine reluctant 
                    cloak

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Gwendolen Song November 19, 2011 at 4:25 PM Hey James...those diamantes ARE very easy...let me have a sneak peak when u eventually write one. I know it will be excellent. Have a great weekend. Gwendolen

M.I.A . November 6, 2011 at 1:24 AM my fav season! great peace, loved that part... lucent... very appealing.

Carolyn Devonshire November 3, 2011 at 1:54 PM Dear James, please let me know Noah's explanation of where crickets go. Children often have keener insight than the rest of us. Remember "The Emporer's New Clothes"? Noah will tell it like he sees it. Thanks for stopping by, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Laura Breidenthal November 2, 2011 at 5:56 PM Lovely piece James!!! Always, Laura

Carolyn Devonshire November 2, 2011 at 1:12 PM Just wanted to wish you and Noah a very happy holiday season, James. Love you, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse November 1, 2011 at 6:23 AM enjoyed reading sounds naughty on this cold morning....you put a cheer in my chill!!

Joanmarie Peranteau October 31, 2011 at 9:33 PM WOW!!!! Dear Brother, BEAUTIFUL..Give me a call, lost your number with my old cell. No longer on FB. How's Noah & Jim. Your sis Joan.

Sara Kendrick October 31, 2011 at 3:01 PM So alluring is your poetic hand..I guess you were one who had snow in your area..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 29, 2011 at 12:44 PM sultry lines of finesse and romance James.. always such a lovely playful presentatiion my friend..enticing the mind and exciting the soul ..while capturing the heart completely.. luv..

Elizabeth Wesley October 28, 2011 at 4:47 PM So subtle, so cool, so James - dear James. Alway that sly eroticism with just the right touch of humor.

Carol Sunshine Brown October 28, 2011 at 6:32 AM Thank you so much for sharing your love of poetry with us James. I hope that you find continued inspiration that you may write and share your poetry for many years to come. Wishing you an amazing weekend. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich October 28, 2011 at 12:40 AM I really enjoyed this one. It's romantic and sweet.

Carolyn Devonshire October 27, 2011 at 6:35 PM How tenderly you treat her, James. Your romantic words made me sigh. She's a lucky lady to have a man like you! Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff October 27, 2011 at 5:57 PM Jimmy....1st. thank you for your comments, as usual, you make me smile! 2nd, your art here breathes fresh love, original beauty! good on yer! jimbo

Wilma Neels October 27, 2011 at 1:22 PM He is such a gentleman ;) you manage to make me smile once again James.. no suprise there, I just love this!! Hope your week has been good thus far, love Wilma

Phyllis Babcock October 27, 2011 at 10:00 AM A gentleman offering your coat. Unique write James. love phyl

Daver Austin October 27, 2011 at 9:31 AM Egad! Chivalry, then, is not dead. Bless you, Sir James and your lady. Love, daver