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Autumn's Breeze

The wind blows. The trees begin to rustle. It seems like that time has come once again. The first snow has fallen. Seems Jack Frost has appeared. Some kids will be laughing. For no school is near. Some even skating. For the ice has begun to appear. The joy has been awakened. Not just joy but beauty as well. Even ice crystals will shimmer ever so brightly. While snow flakes fall ever so gently. On that special morning kids will shout. While a blizzard will scream about. But none will care. Because Christmas will finally be here.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/27/2016 4:07:00 PM
You have woven the words in very well Briennah good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Briennah Reed
Date: 8/29/2016 4:41:00 PM
Thank you *Hugs*
Date: 8/27/2016 4:07:00 PM
Sorry but if this poem is for the contest it won't be allowed if it is I don't know take free verse instead if it is not for the contest it is fine
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Briennah Reed
Date: 8/29/2016 4:41:00 PM
Thanks for telling me I fixed it :)
Date: 8/27/2016 4:00:00 PM
amazing write I really think it is good
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