Autumn's Breath - Couplet

The crimson canopy bleeds out its light,
to clear the stage for an eternal night.

We misread beauty in the dying leaf,
a gilded cover for a timeless grief.

For every joy is a borrowed loan,
and autumn reaps, to turn earth to stone.

The twilight deepens, cold and unappeased,
as life surrenders to a slow disease.

No sanctuary stands against the frost,
which counts the tally of the loved and lost.

The heavy fog absorbs the last faint ray,
and suffocates the memory of day.

The branches reach like skeletal despair,
to pull the pitch-black sky into the air.

Whatever shined was merely an illusion,
a brief distraction from the dark’s intrusion.

The final ember drops into the deep;
the void reclaims the promises we keep.

So let the shadows drink the remaining red,
for all things good belong among the dead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 6, 2026 at 2:36 AM
Victoria, heartfelt congratulations on your contest win for this very well-crafted poem.
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August 29, 2026 at 10:47 PM
wow :)
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