Autumn's Breath - Contest

The countryside is on fire
The heat of the colours
Warms the soul
The crunch of the leaves
As though had been in an inferno
Bringing delight to everyone

The orange and red leaves
Paint the trees when its cold
To bring alive your memories
Only to fall like a dead puppet
When all the strings
Have been let go

Autumn is telling us Winter is nigh
Take the warmth of me
The autumn breath of fire
Implanting reminders of walks
amidst the tropical  storm
of leaves, as they say goodbye


Penned 15 August 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 14, 2013 at 9:08 AM
congratulations Seren, !!! Fresh & Beautiful... love the Autumn Air.... hugs *LINDA
Hamilton Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 6:08 AM
well captured Autumn at it's best congrats Seren love it Shadow x smile
Arowolo Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 11:25 AM
Splendid and wonderful piece, Seren. GREAT write. Congratulations on your win.
A  Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 8:30 AM
nice..... ~SKAT~
Morgan Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 7:46 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Kendrick Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 1:22 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative winning work.It is very expressive and descriptive..Congrats..Sara
Macfarlane Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 10:25 AM
A wonderful write that painted a lovely picture.Congrats on your win! Hugs
Jones Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 6:18 PM
Congratulations Seren
Roberts Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 12:04 AM
Donna , Hi nice to see you, thnks for congrats ...Seren
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 12:22 PM
- Autumn has come, it's a fact! - We get more time to sit inside and share beautiful poem! - Nice to join the contest with you, Seren. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Wishing you a beautiful autumn. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Roberts Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 12:06 AM
Hello Anne Lisa, I love autumn, with its colours and crunchy sounds....Seren
Deschler Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 10:13 PM
Very nice poem, Seren! I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest! I have also entered the "Autumn's Breath" contest. By the way, thank you for reading my poem, "Ghost", and for your nice comments. I really appreciate it!
Roberts Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 10:50 PM
Hello Kelly nce to see you here... Seren
Sirak Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 6:30 AM
Wonderful poem. Autumn is my favorite season and I love the ending about walking in the storm of leaves.
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 3:57 PM
I love spring and autumn ,.... seren
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 2:24 PM
Seren this one got better and better as I went along. I absolutely love the third stanza. The lines about "take the warmth of me" and "the autumn breath of fire" super fine lines!!!
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 3:58 PM
Glad u liked it Andrea ....Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 7:32 AM
oh don't say good bye to it yet I need more sun..tans a rusting... lovely verse Seren, should do well xx
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 3:59 PM
Thx my friend, i love autumn but not quiet. Yet ..... seren
Sivey Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 5:45 AM
The warmth and the chill of autumn is always in the air during this time of the year! I just love the fall, it is so beautiful during this time period, such a gorgeous sight! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this morning! You have amazed me by the splendor of this incredible piece my friend! What a beautiful piece, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 4:00 PM
Thx Russell, enjoy lunch .... Seren
Andresen Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 3:12 AM
- I will not say goodbye to summer yet .... - Beautiful poem, Seren! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 3:56 PM
Nor me, wow winter is too long...Seren
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