Autumn's Breath

A tinge of mauve designed by autumn’s glow upon her leaves, coated in frosty dyes glorious their sways, draped in misty yellow, iridescent like tassels of fireflies. I roam to catch ridged curls in revelry and seek them through air, blowing a wish to wonder at leaves’ palette from ornate tree, their ribs tenderly coiled by fall’s varnish. A landscape gleaming through brushed mosaic where dew trickles on their velveteen sheaths, from backdrop of night’s frame to lamplight’s wick upturned by breath of winds when hours bequeath and know that their radiance will crack in time if I should gather them in my hands to keep. This enchantment is never to be mine, I fling autumn leaves to skies, half asleep. Contest: Autumn's Breath of Gail Doyle
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September 26, 2013 at 10:06 AM
Wait...I am coming....will soon post.
A   Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations Nette, !!! Fresh & Beautiful... love the Autumn Air.... hugs *LINDA
Hamilton Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 6:02 AM
stunning imagery Nette congrats on win Shadow x smile
A  Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 8:28 AM
amazing win Nette ~SKAT~
Morgan Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 7:36 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Kendrick Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 1:11 PM
The leaves are a crop but what a crop...Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats...Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 8:16 AM
You are so gifted Nette, congratulations.
Jones Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 6:11 PM
Nette.....this is a beautiful win....congratulations
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 12:20 PM
- Autumn has come, it's a fact! - We get more time to sit inside and share beautiful poem! - Nice to join the contest with you, Nette. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Wishing you a beautiful autumn. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 11:34 AM
Very nice observation made into a beautiful poem. Loved always, my friend,bl
May Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 2:38 PM
you captured autumn nicely...
Hamilton Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 4:57 PM
you caught me up Nette and carried me into your poem Shadow x smiles
Chircop Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 10:40 AM
I don t know which verse is most beautiful..One better than the other..More mesmerizing like a fairytale's dream : )
Rutherford Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 6:22 AM
Nette you have captured in words a visual picture for us to enjoy. Wonderful poetry. xxoo Anne
Jones Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 3:48 PM
Ah fling autumn leaves to skies..we shall soon.....lovely nette....
Manassian Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 12:59 PM
Read it through twice...Amazing imagery....beautiful...wispy...soft....dreamy...
Sivey Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 12:55 PM
You do know how to enlighten me to the highest peaks my friend! You have captured the essence of autumn and bottled it up for me to sample, and I so do appreciate it Nette! This is such a beautiful poem, I really loved reading this grandiose piece this afternoon! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!
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August 12, 2013 at 11:37 AM
I love this mental picture. Good poem
Horsman Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 10:22 AM
Oh wow nette, this is beauty personified, truly awesome
Andresen Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 10:14 AM
- A beautiful poem .... but I'm not quite ready for the autumn yet .... Please let summer be longer .... Autumn is beautiful but summer is a MY time!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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