Autumn's Breath

Autumn breathes softly through the waking trees,
and amber leaves go dancing with the breeze;
the summer sun grows gentler in the sky,
while swallows stitch their pathways as they fly.

The maples blush as though they’ve heard good news,
the golden fields put on their autumn shoes;
a crimson leaf comes tumbling past my door,
as if the wind has brought a gift from shore.

The mornings wear a silver, misty shawl,
and twilight comes a little soon to call;
the moon appears more intimate and near,
and stars seem brighter in the cooling air.

Yet Autumn's breath is not a breath of grief—
it teaches beauty hidden in release;
for every leaf that falls without regret
whispers, “Let go—and find your wonder yet.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Godwin Avatar
September 22, 2026 at 2:03 AM
Oh, my, by the second verse my heart was beating fast from the flow of poetry adrenaline your words brought forth. At this moment, I feel as though I've no need to read another poem, ever. Wow, I'm pausing .... appreciating Delivery, tight crisp rhyme, beauty in your simple but impressively eloquent imagery - - rut ro, I lost my thought. May have to camp here until it returns. HA, I'm too high to drive home anyway. I am sober enough to fave
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 1:35 AM
Lovely autumn poetry, Jay.
George Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 10:24 PM
"a crimson leaf comes tumbling past my door, as if the wind has brought a gift from shore." What a beautiful thought. Only a true poet can think like this. You have made autumn truly beautiful with the misty dawns and blushing trees. What the falling leaves whisper- "Let go' is a great message. A lovely creation.❤️
Sharma  Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 8:27 PM
Oh dear Jay, this is such a soothing and breathtaking poem, one that calms the heart and lets itself be a balm for the soul. I could feel the breath of autumn in your words! The essence of fall! And the imagery here is just beyond exquisite ~ how impeccably you've also personified the nature, adorable, especially "The maples blush as though they’ve heard good news, the golden fields put on their autumn shoes; a crimson leaf comes tumbling past my door," Wow!! 🍂🍁💫 And "Yet Autumn's breath is not a breath of grief" yesss.. it's filled more with insight and inspires us to let go of any ache that keeps us caged.. truly beautiful! And serene! Pleasure reading your work today, hope you've been well, sending you best wishes and poetic light ~ 🧚 🧚 🌙 ✨
Andresen Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 12:40 PM
- "Yet Autumn's breath is not a breath of grief— it teaches beauty hidden in release,,, " ...so true and beautifully written, Jay :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 12:36 PM
Oh Jay, your beautiful poem is full of splendor, and your phrases ' sun grows gentler in the sky, maples blush as though they’ve heard good news,swallows stitch their pathways, put on their autumn shoes; the wind has brought a gift from shore' are unique and picturesque. Your rhymes flow perfectly, and I love it my friend.
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