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Written 18th August, 2026 for Autumn's Breath Poetry Contest sponsored by Regina Mcintosh

Autumn's Breath

Summer breaks, it goes to bed,
The sunburnt country is no longer red.

Autumn’s breath begins to creep
Across the plains and gullies deep.

It plays an eerie, thoughtful tune,
Beneath a warm and amber moon,

Whispering amongst the majestic gums
To warn the scrub the season comes.

While the changing leaves don't hit the eye:
Bursting gold appears beneath the southern sky,

Bright wattles along the dirt track
To push the longer shadows back.

A flock of cockatoos takes flight,
Screaming at the angled light.

For me, this wind is pure relief...
I find no need for any grief.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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George Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 10:24 PM
The transition of summer to autumn is beautiful. A soothing poem, dear Alison. All the Best.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 11:54 PM
Thank you Valsa.❤️
Hind Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 6:49 PM
gorgeous poem!!
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 7:27 PM
Glad you enjoyed Paige
Poet Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 10:30 AM
Alison, your great poem beautifully captures the transition from summer to autumn with vivid imagery and a soothing tone. The references to nature, like the warm and amber moon and the bright wattles, evoke a strong sense of place. Good luck with the contest.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 2:44 PM
Thank you for your warming comment.❤️
Andresen Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 4:13 AM
- A beautiful breath of autumn, Alison... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 4:37 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise❤️
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