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Autumn's Bar Mitzvah

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                      Out mine vindow
                               as if i
                        breaking some
                                fast
                      Mine eyne devour
                             The she
    
                      In the vind’s gust
                  az vind does with ease
                            cause lift
 
                               hern 
                                she




* ("vind": wind, etc.) artistic license mine poetic friendz
                         ''         ''
                                          ;) james

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/12/2023 10:06:00 AM A creative write. Have a blessed day writing away............. Login to Reply James Peranteau Date: 7/6/2023 11:36:00 AM ;)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/17/2022 11:44:00 AM It just dawned with me that you are writing like someone with an accent. So which nationality is it that uses V in place of W. Hmmm Login to Reply James Peranteau Date: 10/17/2022 12:33:00 PM vell, let me think for a second here vooman...this iz driving me nuts! I'll get back to you with that answer later ;)

Joe Maverick Date: 10/15/2022 8:09:00 PM A good vind-ication as summer takes its Vacation James.' Are these two women in This write btw? The wind and the season? I can't see you keeping such a State of affairs Going without getting all puffed out you know.' Login to Reply James Peranteau Date: 10/16/2022 7:22:00 PM you are half right dear poet...the boy wuz preening himself preparing to announce that this day, he would be the man; and az he wuz adjusting his tie, he looked out his bedroom window and there she wuz, pretty az can be! Likewise with the wind's help(lifting her skirt)the almost man, received his first thought...."it's great to be a man"! Have a great Vinter sir...much love, james