Autumnal Sadness

Swallows migrate South...
dark birds in a starless sky
mourning motherland.


Entered in Raul Moreno's contest, " Tattered Wings "
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 5:52 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James
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April 11, 2010 at 12:38 AM
Congratulations, Andrew, on this exquisite writing. Luv, Andrea
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April 9, 2010 at 2:39 PM
Congrats Andrew on your winning poem and placement in Raul's contest... an excellent write and win..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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April 9, 2010 at 11:02 AM
Andrew, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul
Shango Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 5:40 AM
Goodness ... this image is indelible, and painfully beautiful. Great write and all the best in the contest, great one. One love
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April 7, 2010 at 11:32 PM
Great Senryu...i love its ending too..Charma
Moreno Avatar
April 7, 2010 at 11:29 PM
Andrew, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul
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