Autumnal Rising

Body of south breeze
Seized by the falling maple
Stranded gold field
On the door of autumn sun
Nature turns to rise thyself 



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October 28, 2023
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Parker Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 10:46 AM
Autumn poetic snapshot, MB :o)
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October 30, 2023 at 1:10 AM
A lovely Autumn poem. Well done.
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October 29, 2023 at 11:16 PM
Great imagery and feel in your poem, Mahtab.
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