Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Autumnal Passions

Crimson vistas blaze sapphire sky
Glinting twilight in lovers’ eyes
When desires smile and tempos rise

As autumn’s scarlet feelings vie
Whirling appeal of amber breeze
Sepia dreams crooning hearts seize

Tinting leaves in fiery red dye
Autumnal hints ignite romance
Stealing glance of alluring stance

And lilting vibes, gilded winds sigh
As moonlit mountains enchant sights
Gazing stars of seductive nights

Hoisting tenor of passions high
When embers of love boldly flare
Kissing lips of amorous stare

Crimson vistas blaze sapphire sky
As autumn’s scarlet feelings vie
Tinting leaves in fiery red dye
And lilting vibes, gilded winds sigh
Hoisting tenor of passions high

July 28, 2020
Poem of the day on July 30, 2020
Placed 1st: Constanza poetry contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
Eight syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com)

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Angela Crabtree October 6, 2020 at 1:23 PM A very picturesque poem, Vijay. I really enjoyed it. :) ~Angie

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2020 at 3:07 PM back with my congrats on your wonderful win in the constanza contest, Vijay!

Joseph May September 6, 2020 at 7:58 AM Autumn colors blaze in the sky, Lovely write Vijay, Congrats on your win

Connie Marcum Wong September 6, 2020 at 12:31 AM Your Constanza is bursting with color and the beauty of autumn. Really lovely Vijay! Congratulations on your first placement! Blessings xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos August 1, 2020 at 10:27 AM Vijay, congratulations on this breathtaking superb POTD - I have said before, the many colours you use in your intriguing poetry always enhances your writes to their fullest advantage. So well penned. Blessings and hugs. Jennifer. Vijay Pandit August 2, 2020 at 4:40 AM Thank you my friend--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Arturo Michael August 1, 2020 at 6:18 AM Wow...word artistry displayed here...showing your many colors and moods...Congratulations Vijay on POTD...Well done Vijay Pandit August 1, 2020 at 6:59 AM Much appreciate Arturo--many thanks for your visit and comments.

Winged Warrior July 31, 2020 at 1:33 AM Superbly executed dear Vijay...Congrats!! on POTD!! my friend...blessings...^WW^ :o) Vijay Pandit July 31, 2020 at 4:32 AM Much appreciate WW--many thanks.

Ann Gilmour July 30, 2020 at 10:43 PM Pure joy to read dear Vijay and a well deserved honour for your poetic talents my friend. Sending many congratulations with kindest thoughts Ann xx Vijay Pandit July 31, 2020 at 4:31 AM Thank you Ann--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Team Poetrysoup July 30, 2020 at 3:34 PM wonderful poem Vijay Pandit July 30, 2020 at 5:02 PM So nice to hear from you Team PoetrySoup! I am delighted to see your comments. Many thanks for this wonderful gesture.

Connie Marcum Wong July 30, 2020 at 3:21 PM Your Constanza is very lovely Vijay. Congratulations on having it honored with POTD! Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit July 30, 2020 at 4:57 PM You are the creator, the artist my friend. I had to give it a try knowing how splendid is your poetry. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Connie--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole July 30, 2020 at 2:56 PM Once again, your thoughts take me there. You never disappoint me. There is something magical about Autumn. Leaves holding such vibrant and bold colors. Love, life and passion tangle around each and every word you have placed here. Simply beautiful. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit July 30, 2020 at 3:00 PM Always a joy to read your comments my friend. Your thoughtful feedback is much appreciated, as always. Many thanks, Brandy.

Jan Allison July 30, 2020 at 1:30 PM WoW! Connie, The picture your painted with words looks amazing. Well done in your lovely form. I’m Joseph will like it too. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Alexis Y. July 31, 2020 at 3:02 AM I don’t know what happened here Jan. I commented on Connie’s poem. Vijay Pandit July 30, 2020 at 2:09 PM Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks--many thanks, Jan.

Sam Kauffman July 30, 2020 at 8:59 AM What a lovely poem, Vijay. All the beauty of fall in vivid words joined together in a romantic picture. Congratulations on your POTD. Vijay Pandit July 30, 2020 at 9:52 AM You are so very kind, Sam--much appreciate your comments--many thanks.

Mark Koplin July 30, 2020 at 8:26 AM Beautifully penned good sir! Congrats on POTD! Good luck in the contest, a top place for sure. Vijay Pandit July 30, 2020 at 9:51 AM Thank you sir, for stopping by--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Mark.

Paula Goldsmith July 30, 2020 at 8:02 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. Autumn is beautiful like your poem. Can not wait for the cooler weather and the pretty time of the year. Enjoy your win and day....................... Vijay Pandit July 30, 2020 at 9:48 AM Thank you Paula--much appreciate your kind remarks.

John Watt July 30, 2020 at 7:55 AM Excellent choice for potd today, this is a symphony of color, passion, and poetic imagery. Well done and congratulations, Vijay! Vijay Pandit July 30, 2020 at 9:48 AM So very kind of you, John...much appreciate your comments--many thanks.

Jenna Logan July 30, 2020 at 7:13 AM You've painted a beautiful scene of Autumn, Vijay. Congratulations on it being chosen POTD. Vijay Pandit July 30, 2020 at 7:21 AM Thank you Jenna--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 30, 2020 at 6:45 AM - A beautiful choice of p.o.t.d., congratulations so much Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit July 30, 2020 at 6:48 AM Much appreciate, Anne-Lise..many thanks for your kind remarks.

John Gondolf July 30, 2020 at 4:02 AM Back with congrats on POTD, Vijay, Nicely doen. John Vijay Pandit July 30, 2020 at 4:25 AM Thank you John for your return visit. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham July 30, 2020 at 2:46 AM Your turn for the spotlight Vijay, well deserved POTD honour. Tom Vijay Pandit July 30, 2020 at 4:24 AM Thank you Tom for your return visit--much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

Carolyn Devonshire July 29, 2020 at 2:15 PM I love the way you relate the emotions we feel to the beautiful sights found in nature, Vijay. Especially enjoyed your reference to the "Gazing stars of seductive nights." It brings back wonderful memories from youth. Awesome writing, my friend. A fave for me. Hope you land a top win! Hugs, Carolyn Vijay Pandit July 30, 2020 at 4:24 AM Many thanks my friend--I am honored by your delightful compliments. Much appreciate, Carolyn. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Demetrios Trifiatis July 29, 2020 at 5:32 AM What a wondrous poem! Mesmerizing verses. A Fave, my friend, Vijay! Blessings Vijay Pandit July 29, 2020 at 6:58 AM So wonderful to hear my friend--I always appreciate your valued opinion--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Andrea Dietrich July 28, 2020 at 5:25 PM lots of lovely romantic imagery here, Vijay. Constanza form is such a wonderful creation of our friend Connie. Vijay Pandit July 29, 2020 at 4:29 AM Yes--kudos to our friend Connie for this talented creation. Much appreciate your comments, Andrea--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy July 28, 2020 at 3:32 PM Another BEAUTY, Vijay. You are a master of vivid descriptions! Janice Vijay Pandit July 29, 2020 at 4:27 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate your kind feedback.

Tom Cunningham July 28, 2020 at 11:10 AM Youre the master of romance Vijay, ablaze with autumnal colours. Good luck Tom Vijay Pandit July 29, 2020 at 4:27 AM So very kind of you Tom to say so--much appreciate--many thanks.

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