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Autumnal Beauty

leaves in September sensing winter and limbo shiver and whisper. the falling leaves drift of red, gold and brown colors kissed lips of summer. discolored of age grumbling, sighing, and broken ready for descent. laying a carpet rich and rare, soft and stocky worms ready to slip. +++ The word chosen "Leaf" === August 6, 2014 Form Haiku Sixth Place win Contest: Leaf by Andrea

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:09:00 AM

BEAUTIFUL

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/19/2014 10:53:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading your beautiful poem, once again. It was nice to see it on the winner's list! Congratulations to you, Dr. Ram!

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/19/2014 8:29:00 PM

Beautiful imagery in your leaf story, Dr. Ram. Congratulations.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/18/2014 8:48:00 AM

Another win Dr. Ram, bravo!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/18/2014 1:45:00 AM

your words leave a great mark, dr.ram.. applause to you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/17/2014 10:20:00 PM

Dr Ram, Congratulations, in Andrea's sorta Shell, contest:)....Love Linda

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/17/2014 7:55:00 PM

Congratulations, Dr. Ram on a beautiful win!!! I enjoyed reading this piece - excellent write! Warmest regards. Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 8/17/2014 5:45:00 PM

wonderful haiku with stunning imagery many congratulations on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2014 5:38:00 PM

your words were beautifully descriptive in these little poems, Dr. Ram. (decent is descent, I just now noticed that). Very nicely done. Congrats in my contest.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/17/2014 2:29:00 PM

Loved the use of the word limbo! and the personification! Congrad's on Your win!! Light & Love

Robin Davis

Date: 8/15/2014 8:41:00 AM

Dr. Ram You captured nature so beautifully and descriptively. Thank you for the nice comment on my Footle poem

Diana Burkholder

Date: 8/13/2014 11:19:00 AM

Beautiful appreciation for bringing this to my attention. Diana

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/8/2014 1:38:00 AM

Autumn is my favorite season, and you have perfectly captured it's beauty within these few words. Very nicely done, Dr. Ram! Good luck in Andrea's contest!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/7/2014 7:53:00 PM

sigh Light & Love