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A game piling the Autumn leaves made me smile. Challenging the Grandkids to make the biggest pile. A huge stack of red and gold each one achieves. Made me smile, a game piling the Autumn leaves. Each kiddie so proud of the work they had done. A crisp chill in the air not being warmed by the sun. Tossing the leaves, each child laughed out loud. Of the work they had done, each kiddie so proud. Raining leaves of the season being tossed up so high. Autumn’s their favorite. I’ll tell you all why. The fun throwing bright leaves is the reason. Being tossed up so high, raining leaves of the season.

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Date: 10/5/2023 11:00:00 AM
- A lovely poem, S.V. ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 10/21/2023 4:01:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, your comments are always welcomed. Sorry for the delay in answering this.
Date: 10/5/2023 10:17:00 AM
Greetings, Vs. I'm glad you won my contest. With an abundance of colorful and compelling imagery, this wonderful poem is a veritable feast for the senses. Your skill with language is clear from the way this well-composed poetry is put together. One is left in awe of your artistic ability as you represent the transitions in its lines with exquisite precision and eloquence.
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Date: 10/21/2023 4:03:00 PM
Oh thank you my friend. I am honored to take a place in your contest. I am so glad that you liked it. Please accept my apologies for this late response.
Date: 9/25/2023 10:14:00 AM
Itis nice to read so many different views on autumn season. Nice poem.
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Date: 9/25/2023 10:17:00 AM
Thanks Jay, you know me, always try to be different. Appreciate your comment . Best wishes SV
Date: 9/24/2023 10:39:00 PM
I took ages trying to think of a different slant on this and barely moved an inch from my typical poems on Autumn - you have effortlessly conjured a beautiful scene, magical - love it! (I'm holding out for a ta now ;) )
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Date: 9/24/2023 11:45:00 PM
You had to ruin it! (Haha)
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Date: 9/24/2023 11:26:00 PM
Hahahahah and you wonder why I luv u.. !!!!! OK here goes. Dilly Dally, Whole hearted thanks for your wonderful comment on my humble little poem. Your wonderful support is cherished, always as is your dear friendship. My mere thanks is hardly enough to ever repay your kind words of praise and eloquent uplifting encouragement . In other words.. Ta

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